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The Starting Line: Chapter 8
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Dana shook her head, “Well, I expect to hear all the details tomorrow then. Right Shane?”
I looked at Dana, “Um, sure I guess. Have fun Alice.”
“Yeah Al, have a good time!”
Alice wished us a good evening and took off. I looked back over at Dana, “So she’s bi then I take it?”
Dana shrugged, “Honestly, I just think she’s horny and indecisive. But she says she’s bi, so yeah I guess so. Personally, I don’t know how that works!”
I laughed, “Yeah, never really was interested in going that way myself. But to each their own.”
Dana laughed, “Yeah, you’re right.” We had a moment of silence. Dana clearly got uncomfortable quicker than I thought she would. “So, you’re staying with Bette right now?”
“Yeah, till I find a place of my own.”
“Where were you living before here?”
“Uh, I was still in LA, just a different part of town. But with this job, I want to find something out here in West Hollywood.”
She nodded, “Makes sense.” A cute curly blond walked by us, and Dana all but drooled as she watched her pass. Then she turned back, saw me looking at her, and got red with embarrassment. “Sorry, I don’t know what I’m doing…”
I chuckled, “Don’t apologise, you were admiring the view…. My only question is why you’re still sitting here with me when she’s sitting over there?”
Dana started shaking her head, “Oh no, I couldn’t… I mean I.. what would I say?”
I laughed, “Hello? I’m Dana? Want to grab a drink? Wanna fuck? A number of lines come to mind right now…”
Dana laughed, “Yeah right. So not going to happen! Besides, its not like I could go out on a date or something. I might be seen and my agent has already warned me about that.”
I raised my eyebrows in confusion, “Warned you about what? Who cares if you’re seen on a date?”
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Ahh, I just love the way you write Shane and the rest of the girls. Please post again soon!
Your portrayal really gets to me. Thank you, for writing so beautifully. It is a truly poignant tale. ADx
Awesome chapter and i love the way you write Shane. Post soon!.
Your telling of Shane’s thoughts and feelings are terrific!!! I do not think there have ever been a fic that has concentrated so solely on Shane and her complexities. Your doing such an outstanding job of showing her caring, sensitivity, and her insecurities. Your writing of her past and present is AWING!!! I really love seeing how her and Bette are connected. It seems so like how it would be if we saw it on the show if they had this good writing or let us see this. I also would love seeing a more detailed bonding moment with her and Tina.
Still absolutey perfect…….just how I imagined Shanes back story to be……..but better.Thanks for writng.FAY
Wonder cgapter,Now Shane has a family. thanks
Ah, kd you really had it all in this one! Shane’s question to Alice about the broken part being on the wrong half for her is classic…and the birthday party hurt my heart. I was afraid that she would bolt, at first. To think that she had rarely had even the most minimal of celebrations is so sad, but I think it was also important that you clarified that the effort by her mother, as erratic and minimal as it was, still meant something to Shane, and needs to be respected by the others. I thought it was wonderful that she was able to stay and accept their love and caring. There was even a brief second of hope that Bette and Shane might at some point…!!! which I am holding onto no matter what Shane says. Now, the thing that would make it perfect would be if it were Tina free, but even if she is in it this is still such a beautiful, poignant fic I look forward to daily.