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The Starting Line: Chapter 9
Al shrugged and shook her head, “Whatever. You have some crazy rules though, that’s for sure…” She looked around. “You sure you’re going to be OK living here though? I mean, it’s not exactly the Ritz… or even a Holiday Inn.”
I looked around at the piles of stuff laying around the place. The concert and music posters hanging all over the dirty walls. The galley-style kitchen with the drippy faucet and dirty dishes. The clothing belonging to the other girls strewn around the place.
“I admit, it’s not the nicest place in the world, Al. But I can afford it, and its mine. I’ve never had my own place before, so this is the first step, right? Besides, I’ve lived in worse…”
Al reached over and hugged me. “Well Shane, if you ever need to get away from the obvious estrogen den that you have just planted yourself in the middle of, my door is always open.”
I thanked Alice for the offer, went back out and got my small duffle bag out of the truck, dropped it on the futon along with an old set of sheets Bette had given me for the futon, and headed out the door behind Alice, heading towards The Planet.
We met up with Dana, were halfway through coffees, when Kit joined us. She was on a sober streak at the time, and her energy level showed it. She started telling us about a gig she had coming up soon in town and made us promise that we would come to see her show. Marina sat down with us, and the five of us chatted for a while. Alice’s phone rang, and she answered. After speaking briefly to Bette, who was apparently in the middle of quite a story, she glanced at her phone before quickly interrupting Bette to tell her to call my phone, as her battery was dying. She hung up then looked at me.
“I don’t know exactly what’s going on, but I think I’m in for an adventure this evening, and if I’m going, I’m bringing you down with me.”
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(17 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
I like your story. It keeps getting better…even the dark parts are worth a read. Thanks for the update.
Great chapter! thanks.
I’m really into your story. It’s different and fresh and it is really well written. The idea of the backstory is original and unexplored, but you make the difficult subjects so drawing to read. Thank you, ADx
oh kd, you must be feeling bad, a chapter with ONLY Tina in it and no Bette! Can I help you feel better? Shall I send over some hot chocolate, chicken soup, a masseuse? I will come and read to you, fluff up your pillows…ANYTHING!!! I could be wrong but I still get the idea that Tina, and Alice too to a degree, are treating Shane like some kind of pet instead of a human being, like she is there for them to spoil and play with, instead of truly knowing, and they all know, that her life has been difficult and not just erasable. You know? Seriously, kd, I really hope that whatever’s wrong gets better for you really soon. Here’s a warm fuzzy just for you… HUGZ!!!
Thanks for the update. I really enjoyed it.
Great chapter.
I love the way you have developed this story. So believable… harsh, yet sweet at the same time. Great chapter.