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The Starting Line: Chapter 9
“Do you think my car will be safe here? I mean…”
I laughed, “Yes Al, it’ll be fine. I mean, you don’t exactly drive a Lexus, and people in this area aren’t exactly looking for car stereos, If you know what I mean.”
She looked at me curiously, “And what exactly are they looking for in this area?”
I shrugged, “They’re looking to score… in more ways than one…”
Al looked at me, examining me in a way she hadn’t done since we first met. “And how would you know that?”
I shrugged again, and simply stated the truth, figuring these girls had learned enough about me that it wouldn’t be too big of a shock for Alice to hear. “Because I used to live here, and I was the one scoring… or doing the scoring at least…”
Alice looked at her steering wheel for a moment, taking in what I said. Then she opened up her door. “Well then, I guess I picked the right person to come with me to pick Tina up. Let’s go.”
I laughed at how easily Alice took my confession, and silently thanked her for being… her. We got out of the car and started walking towards the restaurant. As we stopped at a street corner to wait for the light to change so we could cross the street, I felt someone touch my shoulder. While I had been out of the area for a while, my street instincts were still very much in tact, and being back in this area instantly put them back on alert, so when I felt the touch, I quickly jumped back and turned, hands coming up in defence. Looking at me, slightly startled, was none other than Clive.
“Shit Shane, relax! It’s just me.”
“Fuck Clive, don’t do that to me.” I took a breath, then Clive and I hugged briefly. “What are you doing here? Last I heard you were in San Diego with your mom.”
Clive shrugged, “Yeah well, I came back here about a month ago. No one has seen you sin ages. Where did you end up?” He gave me a once over. “I’m guessing you scored something good, you looked cleaned up.”
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(17 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
I like your story. It keeps getting better…even the dark parts are worth a read. Thanks for the update.
Great chapter! thanks.
I’m really into your story. It’s different and fresh and it is really well written. The idea of the backstory is original and unexplored, but you make the difficult subjects so drawing to read. Thank you, ADx
oh kd, you must be feeling bad, a chapter with ONLY Tina in it and no Bette! Can I help you feel better? Shall I send over some hot chocolate, chicken soup, a masseuse? I will come and read to you, fluff up your pillows…ANYTHING!!! I could be wrong but I still get the idea that Tina, and Alice too to a degree, are treating Shane like some kind of pet instead of a human being, like she is there for them to spoil and play with, instead of truly knowing, and they all know, that her life has been difficult and not just erasable. You know? Seriously, kd, I really hope that whatever’s wrong gets better for you really soon. Here’s a warm fuzzy just for you… HUGZ!!!
Thanks for the update. I really enjoyed it.
Great chapter.
I love the way you have developed this story. So believable… harsh, yet sweet at the same time. Great chapter.