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The Starting Line: Chapter 9
I laughed at her threat, and waited for my phone to ring. Bette finally called me and I picked it up, getting the same tale she had started to tell Alice. After five minutes of ranting, I agreed to Bette’s request, told her Al and I would take care of it, and see her later that night. By this point, everyone’s attention was on me, waiting for what they thought would be an interesting tale.
“Tina’s car is in the shop for some reason, she has a business dinner tonight with some film clients, and needs to be picked up after the dinner. Bette had some delivery coming that will be way late, so she needs us to pick Tina up.”
Kit shook her head, “That’s it? All that ranting that I could hear on the phone, and that’s all that’s going on?!”
I shrugged and smiled, “You know Bette…”
Kit laughed, “Boy do I know my baby sister! She can turn an anthill into a mole hill like you wouldn’t believe! I swear that child lives for drama!”
After another hour or so, everyone started peeling away from the table, heading off to whatever they had planned next. Al and I hung out a bit longer till it was time to head off to pick Tina up. We would end up getting to the restaurant she was at early, but it was better than hitting traffic and being late.
It turned out the restaurant was down Santa Monica, close to my old stomping grounds. It was strange, I hadn’t been down to this part of town since I drove to WeHo those few months before. I had toyed with the idea a couple times to come down there to score some blow or something a couple times, but ended up finding someone to score off of at Milk or one of the other clubs and bars I frequented in West Hollywood. I grew a little edgy as we drove around the neighbourhood, looking for a place to park that was relatively close to the restaurant. We finally found a spot a block or so from the restaurant.
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(17 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
I like your story. It keeps getting better…even the dark parts are worth a read. Thanks for the update.
Great chapter! thanks.
I’m really into your story. It’s different and fresh and it is really well written. The idea of the backstory is original and unexplored, but you make the difficult subjects so drawing to read. Thank you, ADx
oh kd, you must be feeling bad, a chapter with ONLY Tina in it and no Bette! Can I help you feel better? Shall I send over some hot chocolate, chicken soup, a masseuse? I will come and read to you, fluff up your pillows…ANYTHING!!! I could be wrong but I still get the idea that Tina, and Alice too to a degree, are treating Shane like some kind of pet instead of a human being, like she is there for them to spoil and play with, instead of truly knowing, and they all know, that her life has been difficult and not just erasable. You know? Seriously, kd, I really hope that whatever’s wrong gets better for you really soon. Here’s a warm fuzzy just for you… HUGZ!!!
Thanks for the update. I really enjoyed it.
Great chapter.
I love the way you have developed this story. So believable… harsh, yet sweet at the same time. Great chapter.