Fan Fiction
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The torch she carried
Story written on August 29, 2012 by kins40.
She could still picture the movements of her fingers as she fantasised about how they would lightly skim the surface of the tanned skin, drawing aimless patterns before growing bolder, dipping as low as the waist before reaching back up as high up as her sternum before barely brushing the underside of her breast.
The rush of heat between her legs she had felt then was similar to the one which brought her back to reality and her current situation
She needed to stop this incessant torture. She needed to stop her daily struggle, but how? Every option, she had explored meant leaving Bette’s side for ever and she was not sure whether she was even capable of doing so.
She sighed loudly at her inner dialogue and straightened up fully on her seat.
The movement made Bette look up from her magazine.
"Hey," she beamed, "Back to the land of the living?"
Tina blushed at the slight mocking tone, She did not mind it, totally absorbed as she was by the million dollar smile Bette was currently sporting.
"Hi," Tina replied embarrassed, "I’m sorry I fell asleep…not much of a travelling companion, huh??"
"You were only out for a little while," Bette reassured, "Feeling better?"
"Sure." Tina lied. It wasn’t true at all obviously. Her inner secret having resurfaced to make her painfully aware of what, she realised now she had resigned herself to, was completely out of her grasp and forever unattainable.
"I should be asking you that question." Tina decided to change the conversation. "You are the Olympic Champion after all."
Bette smiled. She definitely liked the sound of it. "Yeah… I am." But somehow the joy did not seem to reach her eyes.
Tina noticed it. "What’s up? You should still be buzzing. It is an amazing achievement. You should be proud of yourself!"
Bette sighed turning her head to look out of the little airplane window. The peaceful expanse of endless blue sky and cotton-like clouds made her sigh.
"Bette, what’s wrong?" Tina asked worried.
"I think.." the brunette hesitated, "I think I am worried about my next challenge."
"Bette," Tina exclaimed, "The World Championships are not for a while yet. You don’t have to worry about that. Enjoy your moment and let us worry about your training programme."
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slntrdr says
I’d say this deserves a gold medal, but then I would be acknowledging that you said it was a one-off. Let’s call this the prelim; after quarter-, semi- and final installments, I’ll hand out the medal. :-)
bumsue says
WOW! Now that was a gold medal winner! Too bad its only a one-off as it could be such a great story. But I will be respectful and not beg for more… maybe.
teegirl says
A one-off…are you nuts.This is what I call a tease and I’m not too proud to beg. So how about it? Pretty please with a cherry on top;-)
pepper29x says
Maybe a few more please
Kword75 says
Bette might be the Olympic champion, but you, my friend, are a Master!! You wrote this to perfection. And wow, I could just picture Bette on that massage table… *dreamy look*… Anyway, thanks for this wonderful one-off, so good to have you back! xxx Kw
Querida says
Terrific! Please don’t stop!
teegirl says
Hiya Kins…I would like to know what happened during the flight…did they “talk” some more?
wkm says
Wonderful story, thanks
Tanishaa says
more please? always a joy kins :)
cvu says
Bummer?!..and this is only a one off? ..Man I love it!
mette hartmann says
Perfect one-off…now you have all of us wondering about the rest of the flight. Great to see you back.
lodeerca says
Perfect short story!
iHeartHeart says
Yay, you’re BACK (for a bit a least)! What a wonderful Olympic one off and I appreciate that your post coincides with the paralympics (which I wished got way more coverage than it does here). Just one more reason to
favcouple says
Absolutely wonderful. Thank you
dulez says
Outstanding! If this is the kind of output when u take break from break u should do this more often. ;-D
Tibetter24 says
Okay I love and hate ur one-offs at the same time. I love them cause they’re always amazing and I hate them because there’s only one chapter and I want mooooorrrreeee!!!!
griffen says
OMG!! That was awesome…worthy of a gold medal. :) Loved it! I hope you won’t stay away too long though…don’t tease us and come back soon. :)
Merlion says
Kins!!!! 😃hey hey.. 😁welcome back!!!! ☺…. And what a wonderful come back with this lovely story! … Love it!! 😍😍😍… Uhm… are you sure it’s a one off only?!?😔such a tease!! 😲… It’s a long flight ✈ from London 🇬🇧 to USA 🇺🇸… And you only give us a short glimpse of it 😞 with all due respect would you consider to post more?! 😉 hehe… 😊… And I hope your little break from your break would inspire you to share more of your story.. 😁👍 thanks Kins for share the story and brighten my day in this cloudy rainy season here! 😘
didi1956 says
Excellent.Thank you.Please come back soon to “us”.
rocknchick57 says
Amazing, as always Kins!
RobbieRob says
Definitely GOLD!
mscully says
Super champions.
Very beautiful this story.
10 stars.