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The very first time – chapter 11
«What the fuck… OK, everyone, let’s not panic, it’s just a power outage and I’m sure the lights will come back any minute», Bette said to the people around her. Shane walked up to her and whispered in her ear: «I don’t think that’s it, Bette. I went outside and the whole neighbourhood has power…»
«What is it Bette?» You look like you’ve seen a ghost…», Tina told her.
«Come with me T… You too Shane. Where are Dana and Alice?», Bette asked, making her way to the back of the bar. «I don’t know, I haven’t seen them in a while», Shane replied, following Bette and Tina.
«Hey guys, what the fuck is going on?». Alice and Dana showed up from nowhere, looking as pale as ghosts.
«That’s what we’re about to find out… Follow us», Bette commanded. They went through the kitchen and walked toward a closed door in the back. Bette opened it very slowly. The room was lit by a faint street light coming through a small window. Bette walked in and noticed a sheet of paper on the power box. It read : «I can get to you anytime, anywhere… Scared yet ?», written with a newspaper cut-off.
«That bitch!», Bette yelled. She restored the power and turned to her friends.
«What is it Bette?». Alice, Dana, Shane and Tina wondered why Bette was so mad. She handed the sheet to Tina. «Oh no…Oh my God…», she said, on the verge of tears. Bette pulled her cell from her pocket and called Detective Wilson. He listened to what she had to say and told her he was on his way.
The girls then asked everyone to leave for security measure. Bette and Tina stayed by the door in case Claire was still inside and trying to get out without being seen, although they both knew she was probably long gone by now.
«Hey guys, what’s going on?», Sara asked when she finally approached the door. She had a worried look on her face.
Tina took her aside. «It was Claire who turned the power off and she left a note. We’ve called the police, that’s why we want everybody out», she said to her friend.
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(38 votes, average: 3.87 out of 5)
Oh No!!!
oh my
SOTEOMS (Sitting On The Edge Of My Seat)!!
talk about HIGH drama… holy moly!!!great update! :)
WTFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
Unbelievable. how can you leave a girl hanging with only one hand left holding the ledge. Talk about your drama filled days. Please post soon.
This is getting good. Why do I have a feeling that Claire is dead and its Sara who is after Bette and Tina.PPS.
You writer’s and your cliffhangers!!!!!! That was just MEAN!!! Great Chapter Thanks PPVSLN
This is getting more than interesting! We are loving all the suspense and the way you are describing the struggle to survive! This story is getting better and better! PPS – Lucero & Marsha – From Mexico City
I’m loving the suspense!
wow cool story, but don’t keep us waiting too long:)PPS
my same reaction…..oh no!!! i don’t think it’s claire either…
Oh shit, please someone there to help Bette!
A big big big cliff hanger/
who is sara? and why wuld she be the villain?
OMFG I had the thought that they shuld stay at a motel or with friends. kinda move around so she couldn’t rely on their pattern…pps
OH, Milady! That was so not fair come on now get another post up quick before we all lose our minds.
ecstacythrumusic has a point I had the same thought, but she was with Shane when the lights went out unless she found some way to get away from Shane for a quick minute to plant the note. PPS!
I think sarah is behind this!!
Ahhhhh!!
ML, OMG OMG> OH MY GOD!!!! You can;t just leave it there. Hanging on a thread as Tina looks down the barrel of a gun. Am completely on edge now. Claire is a dedicated psycho. Can’t wait until you post again. Please make it soon. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Holy bat guano Batman
What???? You cliffhangered us there….killing me! Great chapter!
You are not serious, you can’t leave us here, please post another chapter soon, don’t let anything happen to Tee.