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The very first time – chapter 11
The two policemen came back from their search and told the detective they hadn’t found anything. Before they left the place, Detective Wilson promised to call them if he had anything new to report.
«And in the meantime, we’ll just try not to be the next victim», a frustrated Bette said as she slammed the door behind them. «This is so fucking ridiculous! This mad woman is after us and nobody can do a damn thing about it!», she shouted.
«Come on baby, let’s go home», Tina told her, putting her arm around her waist.
«Good idea T… Good night guys», Bette told Dana, Alice and Shane. «Be careful you two», they replied.
Bette and Tina walked quickly to the Saab and locked the door once inside the car. For the first few minutes of the drive, Tina was quiet, looking out her window. «What are you thinking ?», Bette asked softly. At first, she thought she hadn’t heard her because Tina kept silent. She then slowly turned around and faced Bette.
«That you never really know someone», she almost whispered. She shook her head and closed her eyes. «I mean Claire’s no saint you know… She cheated on me, lied to me, deceived me, but this stalking and violence, I never thought she would do something like this. I can’t believe she’s coming after me this way»
«Maybe it’s not you she’s after baby… She probably wants me out of the way so she can have you back…»
Tina started at her, wide eyed. «How could she think I would want her back after all she’s done?», she almost shouted.
Bette put her hand on Tina’s arm and stroked her very gently. «Of course you wouldn’t, but she’s not thinking rationally these days», Bette explained.
«Well let’s just pray that the police will find her soon, because I can’t take much more of this», Tina told Bette, her voice quivering.
Bette pulled into the driveway and stopped the car. Before they got out, she put her arms around Tina and held her tight. «They will and everything will be fine again», she said, stroking her back tenderly.
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Two days later, Tina received a phone call from her boss asking her to meet with him. Luckily, they hadn’t heard a thing from Claire during that time.
«God, I hope your boss has good news for you baby», Bette told Tina.
«Me too… I can’t wait to go back to work. Are you going to The Planet?»
«Yeah, in a little while… Call me the minute you finish your meeting, OK baby?». Bette gave Tina a sweet kiss and wished her good luck. Tina left the house and Bette heard her car drove away. She was in the kitchen getting some coffee when she heard the front door opening.
«Baby, did you forget something?»
When she didn’t get any answer, she went to the living room to find herself face to face with the barrel of a gun…
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(38 votes, average: 3.87 out of 5)
Oh No!!!
oh my
SOTEOMS (Sitting On The Edge Of My Seat)!!
talk about HIGH drama… holy moly!!!great update! :)
WTFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
Unbelievable. how can you leave a girl hanging with only one hand left holding the ledge. Talk about your drama filled days. Please post soon.
This is getting good. Why do I have a feeling that Claire is dead and its Sara who is after Bette and Tina.PPS.
You writer’s and your cliffhangers!!!!!! That was just MEAN!!! Great Chapter Thanks PPVSLN
This is getting more than interesting! We are loving all the suspense and the way you are describing the struggle to survive! This story is getting better and better! PPS – Lucero & Marsha – From Mexico City
I’m loving the suspense!
wow cool story, but don’t keep us waiting too long:)PPS
my same reaction…..oh no!!! i don’t think it’s claire either…
Oh shit, please someone there to help Bette!
A big big big cliff hanger/
who is sara? and why wuld she be the villain?
OMFG I had the thought that they shuld stay at a motel or with friends. kinda move around so she couldn’t rely on their pattern…pps
OH, Milady! That was so not fair come on now get another post up quick before we all lose our minds.
ecstacythrumusic has a point I had the same thought, but she was with Shane when the lights went out unless she found some way to get away from Shane for a quick minute to plant the note. PPS!
I think sarah is behind this!!
Ahhhhh!!
ML, OMG OMG> OH MY GOD!!!! You can;t just leave it there. Hanging on a thread as Tina looks down the barrel of a gun. Am completely on edge now. Claire is a dedicated psycho. Can’t wait until you post again. Please make it soon. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Holy bat guano Batman
What???? You cliffhangered us there….killing me! Great chapter!
You are not serious, you can’t leave us here, please post another chapter soon, don’t let anything happen to Tee.