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    The very first time – chapter 11

    «My God, she’s really crazy… Please, be careful Tina», Sara begged her. She gave her a hug and then kissed Shane. «Call me…», she said in a flirtatious tone. «I will», Shane promised.

     

    «This is scary, guys. That woman is a real nut case», Dana said, closing the door behind the last customer and locking it.

    «You don’t think she could be hiding here somewhere, do you?», Alice asked them, looking around.

     

    Bette reassured her. «I’m sure she left the moment right after the lights went off», Bette said. Tina was sitting next to her and looked like a nervous wreck. «Hey baby, don’t worry, the police will catch her…», she told her, taking her hands in hers.

    «But what happens in the meantime ? What if she comes after me or you ? I know her well baby, she’s a very clever woman». Bette didn’t know what to say to that and deep down, she would never admit it, but she was also very scared. A mad woman could be a very dangerous woman.

     

    They were all startled when they suddenly heard a knock. Bette walked up to the door and breathed a sigh of relief when she recognized Detective Wilson. He was with two police officers. She let them in and introduced Alice, Shane and Dana.

    Detective Wilson asked the two officers to take a look around and then turned to Bette. «May I see the note she left you?». Bette pulled the wrinkled sheet of paper from her pocket. «I just realised that I should have left it where I found it», Bette said.

     

    He waved it off. «My guess is that she wore gloves, but just in case we’ll dust the power box for fingerprints». He read the note and put it in his pocket. «I don’t have to tell you that you must be very careful until we find Miss Lewis», he told Bette and Tina.

    Bette looked at him. «Can’t we have some kind of protection? What if she comes after us ? She already killed one woman…», Bette said.

     

    «I don’t have the men power to assign someone to you 24/7, but I’ll ask for the patrolmen to drive by your house several times during the night. I know it’s not much, but that’s the best I can do for now», he explained as he stood up.

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    Comments

    1. This is getting more than interesting! We are loving all the suspense and the way you are describing the struggle to survive! This story is getting better and better! PPS – Lucero & Marsha – From Mexico City

    2. ecstacythrumusic has a point I had the same thought, but she was with Shane when the lights went out unless she found some way to get away from Shane for a quick minute to plant the note. PPS!

    3. ML, OMG OMG> OH MY GOD!!!! You can;t just leave it there. Hanging on a thread as Tina looks down the barrel of a gun. Am completely on edge now. Claire is a dedicated psycho. Can’t wait until you post again. Please make it soon. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

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