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    The Warning Label – 5

    Story written on February 1, 2007 by tiff_duke.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=64313
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    Part Five.

    Bette could also tell anyone who asked the pros and cons she’d drawn as to why she and Tina should get over their break and just resume their relationship.

    Bette sighed, stirring her drink with the olive. She could only imagine what Tina must think of her now.

    The sound of laughter somewhere down the bar jarred Bette back to the here and now, only to make her cringe. She was even hearing the blonde’s laughter now.

    She really needed to get drunk.

    Bette loathed her maudlin sentiment, thinking to herself that the amount of how much she missed Tina in their one week separation would lead her to see the blonde no matter where she looked. This morning’s events made that clear.

    To be honest Bette had felt Tina’s presence that morning. But having just sworn that she would no longer think of the blonde, Bette had ignored that feeling. Ignored the sound of laughter that never failed to make her heart skip a beat. The warm sensation of someone who meant something gazed in her direction. No, she’d ignored all those signs. Because Tina knew that The Planet was Bette’s hang out. This was where she had her breakfast every single day. Tina wouldn’t go there, not when everything was so up in the air between them. Or final. Or whatever things were — or had been — between them. Bette also thought that those signs had been in her imagination.

    And here it was again.

    Just to laugh at her, Bette knew the universe would have some blonde that resembled Tina somewhere in the bar. Just to mock her and remind her of what she didn’t have.

    Bette looked up, and, sure enough, a woman with wavy blond hair stood at the opposite end of the bar, talking to a corresponding yuppie guy. Bette found her gaze transfixed on the blonde, thinking to herself that Tina had that exact same pinstripe suit. There must have been a sale for that suit to all straight blond women.

    Bette glanced at the woman’s drink. Cosmopolitan. Typical.

    The guy with the woman glanced in Bette’s direction, and saw her staring. True to form, he told the blonde that she had a potential stalker.

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    1. Bette with the straight crowd. OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol I take it that’s the end of this little number? =/ I see Tina liked throwing shoes even back then.

    3. god tibette listen to each other and stop jumping face first into the mud…why do all the good ones have to end tiff? we love your writing and least we have the other story going on.. please contiue it the other story that is.

    11. Your dialogue is so incredibly good chapter after chapter, it always leaves me feeling like I am still in grade school, struggling to learn my ABCs! Thanks!

    12. I had to chuckle at Tina considering her friend pure evil… but, then again, I think some of my friends might view me that way… anyway, I’m glad they were able to work that out… SO CUTE. The dialogue is fantastic, as Sea said, and you weave a wonderful tale. Thanks!

    18. Tina is just a born problem solver – rather than try to run after Bette in those insanely high heels they wear, she threw the shoe. It got results so she used it again and then again in their relationship. The scene in the bar is just the way Bette would play it. Great!

    19. Well, I have been away from the site for almost a year, and a friend of mine told me that I should check out your story. I am so very glad that I did. I love your use of dialogue, you have such a talent for it, and you get all the characters so precisely. I’m honored that you use the term Blondie McHottie and reading your story makes me want to pick mine up again. Thanks for all your hard work, it was truly an awesome pleasure to read.

    22. I loved it, but i love all your stories. It sounds like this one is over though, I wouldn’t mind if it continues though. Also, wheres the update for the other story?

    23. Well TD, More brilliance and delight from you. The misunderstanding and then capitulation to the truth was wonderfully drawn out. What makes this amusing is the realization of their own bull headedness. Bette was determined to prove that Tina didn’t matter to her; that Tina was just another notch on her bed post but the truth will out. While Tina was fooling herself in making Shannen take her to the Planet as if this was a typical day. Tina’ real motive was to catch a glance of her love. Shame that this was while Bette was being chatted up. Be careful of what you wish for as it might come true. The bar scene was hilarious as the posturing and pretentiousness of both gals nearly ruined a great time. Now that Tina made the first move and they both admitted their part in the whole debacle, forward motion can be made. Loved the simplicity with which Tina offered to introduce Bette to Shannen while warning her off at the same instant. All good things come to those who wait and I have been good and patient so am awaiting my reward. Please continue soon and dazzle me with your dialogue, Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    24. Mmmm… this could get messy. We all know that it will – but in the best of ways of course. This was sooo nicely written. Alpha Tina and alpha Bette, you gotta love that. Thanks!!!

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