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    The Warning Label – 5

    Story written on February 1, 2007 by tiff_duke.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=64313
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    Part Five.

    Tina emerged from the doors of the bar, and glanced around for that familiar form that she was learning she really liked.

    Bette strode as swiftly as she could towards her car, hoping for the sanctuary that it would provide as compared to that bar, or this harsh night air.

    She hated the universe. Bringing Eric into her gallery, and conspiring with him into bringing Tina Kennard into her life. Now, look: Bette was having a crash course into what it meant to be victim to following her heart.

    Why did she park her car so far away?

    "Hey!" She heard the cry, before a shoe landed about a foot away from her.

    Bette frowned, and turned to glare at the incompetent shoe thrower. Sure, she missed, but she had no doubt that shoe had been thrown in her direction.

    Tina limped towards her, passing her to pick up her shoe, before turning to level Bette with a look. "What was that?"

    "I don’t know, T, you’re the one at a bar with a guy," Bette pointed out.

    "I was having an after-office drink. I ran into Trent there." Tina explained.

    "And he—"

    "He was there waiting for his date, who is running late."

    "His date?" Bette echoed, puzzled.

    "And if you’d stayed, you would’ve met his date." Tina told her, putting on her shoe. "His date being the person to whom I’ve given every detail of our relationship since we met."

    "You told me–"

    "I know what I told you!" Tina cut in, exasperated. "I know. But she’s evil. She pretty much sprang from the head of some Zeus-like being to spread wrath upon the land."

    "You’re comparing her to a Greek goddess?" Bette asked.

    "She’s evil." Tina repeated. "I wasn’t about to make her the first friend of mine for you to meet."

    "You knew I wanted to meet your friends." Bette pointed out.

    "Again," Tina stated, "she’s evil. And she could’ve scared you off."

    "You couldn’t just tell me this before?"

    "I did. I tried. You thought I just didn’t want her to meet you." Tina explained.

    "Don’t you have other friends?" Bette asked.

    "Yeah, but it’s peak season."

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    Comments

    1. Bette with the straight crowd. OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol I take it that’s the end of this little number? =/ I see Tina liked throwing shoes even back then.

    3. god tibette listen to each other and stop jumping face first into the mud…why do all the good ones have to end tiff? we love your writing and least we have the other story going on.. please contiue it the other story that is.

    11. Your dialogue is so incredibly good chapter after chapter, it always leaves me feeling like I am still in grade school, struggling to learn my ABCs! Thanks!

    12. I had to chuckle at Tina considering her friend pure evil… but, then again, I think some of my friends might view me that way… anyway, I’m glad they were able to work that out… SO CUTE. The dialogue is fantastic, as Sea said, and you weave a wonderful tale. Thanks!

    18. Tina is just a born problem solver – rather than try to run after Bette in those insanely high heels they wear, she threw the shoe. It got results so she used it again and then again in their relationship. The scene in the bar is just the way Bette would play it. Great!

    19. Well, I have been away from the site for almost a year, and a friend of mine told me that I should check out your story. I am so very glad that I did. I love your use of dialogue, you have such a talent for it, and you get all the characters so precisely. I’m honored that you use the term Blondie McHottie and reading your story makes me want to pick mine up again. Thanks for all your hard work, it was truly an awesome pleasure to read.

    22. I loved it, but i love all your stories. It sounds like this one is over though, I wouldn’t mind if it continues though. Also, wheres the update for the other story?

    23. Well TD, More brilliance and delight from you. The misunderstanding and then capitulation to the truth was wonderfully drawn out. What makes this amusing is the realization of their own bull headedness. Bette was determined to prove that Tina didn’t matter to her; that Tina was just another notch on her bed post but the truth will out. While Tina was fooling herself in making Shannen take her to the Planet as if this was a typical day. Tina’ real motive was to catch a glance of her love. Shame that this was while Bette was being chatted up. Be careful of what you wish for as it might come true. The bar scene was hilarious as the posturing and pretentiousness of both gals nearly ruined a great time. Now that Tina made the first move and they both admitted their part in the whole debacle, forward motion can be made. Loved the simplicity with which Tina offered to introduce Bette to Shannen while warning her off at the same instant. All good things come to those who wait and I have been good and patient so am awaiting my reward. Please continue soon and dazzle me with your dialogue, Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    24. Mmmm… this could get messy. We all know that it will – but in the best of ways of course. This was sooo nicely written. Alpha Tina and alpha Bette, you gotta love that. Thanks!!!

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