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Thick and Thin (Part 10)
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“Al, its fine. Shane said she can take me and will come and pick me up after, it must be important if they said you have to go so you do have to go!” Dana tried to sound convincing but deep down she was gutted. She hated Mondays and having Alice there was the only thing that made them bearable. She hated her friends having to rally round too, she loved them for it but as a very independent person, Dana found it hard to accept the fact that she needed their help.
“I don’t want to go.” Alice replied quietly
“Neither do I but we both have to, for different reasons maybe but it’s a few hours Alice, we’ll be ok.”
“I’ll be home as quick as I can and will try my best to get to the hospital in time”
“I know baby but you’re on the other side of town. Come on we’re not even watching this movie, let’s just sleep.”
Dana and Alice both got up early the next morning as neither could sleep. Alice still felt she’d let Dana down and Dana always got up early because she couldn’t sleep the night before treatment no matter how hard she tried. For some reason they both felt quite emotional at breakfast, as if somebody knew they were to be separated when they least wanted it. To get them both through the next few hours Dana gave Alice her silver necklace that Alice had given her for her birthday the previous year to wear during her meeting so that Dana was with her. Dana picked out Alice’s green and white headscarf that she wore when they went running in the days before their relationship. Dana loved it and always thought it made Alice look really hot.
The doorbell to Dana’s condo rang
“Shit is that Shane already? I’m so late!”
Dana laughed as she went to answer the door as Alice ran around looking for her shoes.
“Hey Shane sorry gotta run” Alice rushed before stopping her mad dash and taking Dana in her arms “I’m always here with you ok? No matter where I am I’m sending you love and kisses.” She kissed Dana before whispering “I love so much and I’m so sorry.”
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WOW…I am nervous!!!
No! You just had to do that didn’t you? I knew, as the word accident came out of Shane’s mouth, exactly what was going to happen. I got that feeling of dread. You know? Where you know something bad is destined to happen, and you hope, and hope that it’s not going to happen in the end, but then of course it does anyway. It makes me nuts! Anyway. Great update. I really liked it. I can’t wait to see what happens. I hope that Alice is okay. They’re going through enough hard times as it is.
oh wow… this looks very grim. please post soon i have got to know what happens.
ohhhh noo!! please let alice be ok!! update soon!!!
Oh no.When I read that I just felt dread in my body.
A great piece of writing! But so sad…. please post soon! :-)
please no I hope that alice is o.k please please post soon and what will shane tell dana great update I love it
AS son a i read Alice had clocked out i just knew she was in the accident, please let her just have a few scratches, great update by the way
man, i got goosebumps…
omg..i love this story..so heart warming and yet gut wrenching at the same time.. i just knew when cindy said ” she left 2 hours ago” that it was her… anyway pls post more soon!
I’m not going to need anti-depressants, am I? Better tell me now so that I have therapeutic levels BEFORE reading the next chapter. (Here’s hoping they would actually work as opposed to just making me crazier.) Good stuff. Looking forward to your next post.
No no no…tell me it isn’t so! Please let her be alright. I couldn’t deal with Alice being gone in this story! Great update you leave me wanting more!!