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Thick and Thin (Part 10)
“Any word from Al?”
Dana shook her head with her eyes still shut.
“She’s probably stuck in that traffic jam, that’s over her office’s way right?”
“Yeh” Dana mumbled in reply not really thinking
The remainder of the drive was done in silence and when they arrived at Dana’s, Shane helped Dana into the house and into bed.
“I’ll just hang here for a while till Al gets back; give me a shout if you need anything, ok?”
Dana nodded and smiled at Shane before closing her eyes and allowing her body to rest as the medicine that had been pumped through her veins all afternoon set about its work.
Shane went and tried to phone Alice and when it went straight to voice box she phoned her office.
“LA Magazine, Cindy speaking how can I help you?”
“Hi can I speak to Alice Piezecki please, it’s a friend.”
“I’m sorry Ms Piezecki left the building some time ago, have you tried her cell?”
“Yes it’s off; do you know what time she left?”
“I’ll check, one moment…..14.37 almost two hours ago now. I do know she was heading to a hospital appointment with her girlfriend perhaps that is why her cell is off.”
Shane thanked Cindy for her help and hung up.
“Where are you Al?” Shane said to the empty room
14.36
“Hey Cindy that’s me finished and I am outta here. Clock me out please.”
“Alice you do know you are the only one that still uses the old system?”
“I know but I like the whole clocking in and out thing. Makes me feel like I’m free.”
Cindy laughed.
“Anyway I gotta rush, Dana’s at the hospital and I need to pick her up soon.”
“Ok well that’s you officially clocked out.”
“Great thanks, have a good holiday if I’m not back in again soon.”
“Thanks, hope La Cienga’s quiet for you.”
“So do I, bye”
And with that Alice left her place of work and headed to her car. Fifeteen minutes later she was heading along La Cienga making good time, the lights were green at the intersection as the light blue Mini made its way towards the medical centre. The next thing Alice saw was a flash of silver in front of her, she swerved to avoid hitting it head on before becoming aware of a large vehicle to her right.
Shane flicked on the TV
“Traffic lights fail at an LA intersection. 8 vehicles have been involved in a serious collision on La Cinega this afternoon. There have been two reported fatalities and ten others are said to be in a serious condition, two of them are reported to be critical. Let’s go live to LA and join our reporter on the scene…”
“Fuck”
Shane stopped listening; she went numb as her brain registered the images she was seeing. The pictures from the helicopter showed the remains of the vehicles involved from the crash. They were not clearly defineable apart from a Wallmart truck and the remains of one light blue Mini.
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WOW…I am nervous!!!
No! You just had to do that didn’t you? I knew, as the word accident came out of Shane’s mouth, exactly what was going to happen. I got that feeling of dread. You know? Where you know something bad is destined to happen, and you hope, and hope that it’s not going to happen in the end, but then of course it does anyway. It makes me nuts! Anyway. Great update. I really liked it. I can’t wait to see what happens. I hope that Alice is okay. They’re going through enough hard times as it is.
oh wow… this looks very grim. please post soon i have got to know what happens.
ohhhh noo!! please let alice be ok!! update soon!!!
Oh no.When I read that I just felt dread in my body.
A great piece of writing! But so sad…. please post soon! :-)
please no I hope that alice is o.k please please post soon and what will shane tell dana great update I love it
AS son a i read Alice had clocked out i just knew she was in the accident, please let her just have a few scratches, great update by the way
man, i got goosebumps…
omg..i love this story..so heart warming and yet gut wrenching at the same time.. i just knew when cindy said ” she left 2 hours ago” that it was her… anyway pls post more soon!
I’m not going to need anti-depressants, am I? Better tell me now so that I have therapeutic levels BEFORE reading the next chapter. (Here’s hoping they would actually work as opposed to just making me crazier.) Good stuff. Looking forward to your next post.
No no no…tell me it isn’t so! Please let her be alright. I couldn’t deal with Alice being gone in this story! Great update you leave me wanting more!!