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Thick and Thin (Part 10)
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Dana pulled back with tears in her eyes “Don’t apologise ever, it’s a few hours Alice and it’ll be ok. Yoda will be watching over me” Dana flashed her goofy smile.
“True, ok I gotta run.” With that Alice ran out to her little blue Mini and turned it round to face the road before stopping and getting out again and running up the steps. “Just one more” She said before capturing Dana’s mouth in hers, it was kiss filled with emotion and love. And with that Alice darted off again and the little car disappeared into the distance.
The treatment proceeded as usual and by the end Dana was in her usual mood, grumpy, tired and sore. Her arm ached, her veins burned and Alice hadn’t made it back in time to pick her up which intensified her bad mood.
Shane’s cellphone rang “Hey Dane, you finished?”
“Yeh I haven’t heard from Al so she must still be busy.” Dana replied, knowing that Alice must’ve really been busy but despite knowing it sounded selfish she wanted her here with her and not in a stupid meeting.
“No sweat, I’ll pick you up in ten mins.”
“Ok I’ll go downstairs and wait outside.”
“Ok but take it easy or I’ll get my ass kicked by nurse Piezecki later!”
Dana smiled as Shane rang off before taking a deep breath and slowly making her way downstairs.
Twenty minutes later Shane arrived outside the hospital to find a very tired and very pissed off Dana waiting for her.
“What the fuck took you so long Shane?”
“Sorry traffic was mad, I had to take a total detour, and KCRW said there was a major accident on La Cienga and to avoid it at all costs.”
Dana suddenly felt like a bitch
“Sorry”
“It’s cool, I’d be pissed too, and you just wanna go home and head to your bed right?” Shane tried to understand but Alice and Dana had kept a lot of the details about their treatment day routine private for Dana’s sake so Shane felt a little out of her depth.
Dana closed her eyes and rested her head on the side of her seat. “Yeh pretty much.”
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WOW…I am nervous!!!
No! You just had to do that didn’t you? I knew, as the word accident came out of Shane’s mouth, exactly what was going to happen. I got that feeling of dread. You know? Where you know something bad is destined to happen, and you hope, and hope that it’s not going to happen in the end, but then of course it does anyway. It makes me nuts! Anyway. Great update. I really liked it. I can’t wait to see what happens. I hope that Alice is okay. They’re going through enough hard times as it is.
oh wow… this looks very grim. please post soon i have got to know what happens.
ohhhh noo!! please let alice be ok!! update soon!!!
Oh no.When I read that I just felt dread in my body.
A great piece of writing! But so sad…. please post soon! :-)
please no I hope that alice is o.k please please post soon and what will shane tell dana great update I love it
AS son a i read Alice had clocked out i just knew she was in the accident, please let her just have a few scratches, great update by the way
man, i got goosebumps…
omg..i love this story..so heart warming and yet gut wrenching at the same time.. i just knew when cindy said ” she left 2 hours ago” that it was her… anyway pls post more soon!
I’m not going to need anti-depressants, am I? Better tell me now so that I have therapeutic levels BEFORE reading the next chapter. (Here’s hoping they would actually work as opposed to just making me crazier.) Good stuff. Looking forward to your next post.
No no no…tell me it isn’t so! Please let her be alright. I couldn’t deal with Alice being gone in this story! Great update you leave me wanting more!!