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    Thick and Thin (Part 19)

    “Oh baby. What’s worst? Your back, head or leg?”

    “My leg is just a dull ache, my back feels like knives are getting pushed into it and my head just kinda pounds. I feel I bit dizzy and a bit sick. Fuck.” Alice replied still whispering, her eyes closed once more.

    Dana kissed Alice gently on the forehead and took her hands in her own before gently and quietly laying out her plan to her beloved writer, “Ok Al, here is what we’re going to do. You’re gonna sit here for a minute and I’m gonna get your pills and some water. Once they start to kick in I’m gonna get your chair and take you through to bed ok? Don’t want you walking about. Once you’re comfortable I’ll phone the doctor like he asked and explain how you felt and we’ll see what he says ok?”

    Tears were still falling from Alice’s eyes as Dana got up and went to fetch the medication and water.

    Moments later and Dana returned to Alice’s side with the medication.

    “Ok babe, here you go.”

    Alice swallowed the pills and slowly leaned back into the couch as she waited for them to work their magic. Dana gingerly sat down next to Alice and took her hand in hers.

    “Al, I’m so sorry.”

    Alice opened her eyes and looked directly at Dana with a puzzled look etched on her face.

    “What for?”

    “You should still be in hospital and I know you pestered your doctor to let you out early so you could come home to me because I couldn’t get in and see you.”

    “Dana stop. I hated the hospital yes and yes I did insist on coming home early because I missed you and want to be here for you but I also couldn’t stand the hospital. It was noisy and a bit scary and just weird clean!”

    Dana smiled softly

    Alice took a deep breath before continuing.

    “I’ll never regret coming home and the doctor wouldn’t have let me go if he thought it wasn’t a good idea so don’t blame yourself honey. You have nothing to apologize for. I just slept through my lunchtime meds that’s all.”

    The time that Alice had taken to calm Dana’s fears was enough for her medication to set in.  Dana fetched the wheelchair and was about to help Alice into it and back to bed when the doorbell rang.

    Comments

    1. I just read all chapters again to refresh my memory of this awesome story. I am so glad that you came back with another chapter. It is nice to see everyone pulling together to help both of them recover. Beautifull writing! Please continue…..Soon!

    2. Yay I’m so glad you posted! I kept hoping you’d continue with this, and after a chapter like this you’d better keep writing! I still heart this story quite a bit and I don’t want to see it end this way!

    3. Gemzo, thank you for answering my prayer. Did you write with the speed of light? This is the one and only current story with A & D both together disabled so to speak. It is really awesome to see the two of them fussing, loving and taking care of each other. In addition, there was Sharon being so understanding and looking after them. I believe this heavy duty story must be very difficult to write. Yet you manage to throw in some humor. I can just picture A “shuffled into the kitchen with her crutch under her right arm and a pair of sun shades on to block out the sun.” Poor A with a dent in her head but still hot as GI Jane. And then you continued with D asking Shane to look after A. I was in tears and am really worried about D for the next 3 weeks. I hope she would be able to pull through. And DO NOT let her die please. No dying for Ms. Dana in the world of fan fics. Please, please & please !!! TBC with the question mark. Not a chance! This story has substance and please continue. Danish needs you. I will comment as long as you will post. pps.

    4. I second (third?) everyone else when I say that you should please continue. This is a very interesting story. I love how the girls take care of each other more than they do themselves. They really are devoted to one another. With the framily and Sharon they should pull through fine. That’s my subtle way of requesting that both girl’s survive to grow old together. Please?

    5. Oaky…so I’m more than a month late, but please, Gem, keep writing. Believe me I hear ya on the whole life keeps interfering thing, so write when you can and post when you can and we’ll be here, eagerly awaiting the next part of Thik and Thin. (Oh, but PPS, will you?)

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