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    Thick and Thin (Part 19)

    Dana found Shane on the doorstep. “Yo Dane, how are we both today? Thought I’d just swing by and say hi”

    “Of course Shane, Al isn’t feeling too great, I was just going to take her back to bed.” Dana explained as she led Shane through to the living room.

    “I can hear you two girls whispering, I’m fine” Alice said by way of greeting.

    Shane sat on one chair as Dana sat back down beside Alice checking she was indeed ok.

    Alice took Dana’s hand “I’d prefer to sit up anyway Dane my back doesn’t like our bed too much, sitting is easier for me.” she explained and then studied Dana.  Her eyes had dark circles underneath them; she was bundled up in a heavy sweater and looked pretty rough.

    “Hey Shane have you eaten? Sharon left us some food for prepared if you want some too? I’m starved thanks to the hospital food, it tastes like poopy shit”

    “That’s nice Al!” Shane laughed “I’ve eaten but I’ll grab you guys something from the kitchen if you want?”

    “Sure”

    “Not for me thanks Shane I’m still feeling a bit rough”

    “Dane you’ve gotta eat, it’s really important.”

    “Alice I’ve just said I don’t feel well.” Dana started to get a little aggravated

    “Dana you can get pissed at me if you want, but you’ve got to keep your nutrients and your strength up. Please take some anti sickness stuff, have a bite to eat and go and lie down.”

    Dana had been trying to convince herself she felt better than she did since Alice had returned home.  She was so happy that Al was home and on the mend that she had wanted to believe the light at the end of the tunnel was close for both of them.  In all honestly Dana still felt like shit, she’d been sleeping a lot over the past few weeks and was beginning to realise that it hadn’t actually had as much to do with missing Alice as she’d thought, her body was just run down and trying to conserve her energy and heal itself.

    “Yeh ok” Dana quietly agreed.

    After Dana had picked at some bread and cheese and managed to eat some fruit she decided enough was enough.

    Comments

    1. I just read all chapters again to refresh my memory of this awesome story. I am so glad that you came back with another chapter. It is nice to see everyone pulling together to help both of them recover. Beautifull writing! Please continue…..Soon!

    2. Yay I’m so glad you posted! I kept hoping you’d continue with this, and after a chapter like this you’d better keep writing! I still heart this story quite a bit and I don’t want to see it end this way!

    3. Gemzo, thank you for answering my prayer. Did you write with the speed of light? This is the one and only current story with A & D both together disabled so to speak. It is really awesome to see the two of them fussing, loving and taking care of each other. In addition, there was Sharon being so understanding and looking after them. I believe this heavy duty story must be very difficult to write. Yet you manage to throw in some humor. I can just picture A “shuffled into the kitchen with her crutch under her right arm and a pair of sun shades on to block out the sun.” Poor A with a dent in her head but still hot as GI Jane. And then you continued with D asking Shane to look after A. I was in tears and am really worried about D for the next 3 weeks. I hope she would be able to pull through. And DO NOT let her die please. No dying for Ms. Dana in the world of fan fics. Please, please & please !!! TBC with the question mark. Not a chance! This story has substance and please continue. Danish needs you. I will comment as long as you will post. pps.

    4. I second (third?) everyone else when I say that you should please continue. This is a very interesting story. I love how the girls take care of each other more than they do themselves. They really are devoted to one another. With the framily and Sharon they should pull through fine. That’s my subtle way of requesting that both girl’s survive to grow old together. Please?

    5. Oaky…so I’m more than a month late, but please, Gem, keep writing. Believe me I hear ya on the whole life keeps interfering thing, so write when you can and post when you can and we’ll be here, eagerly awaiting the next part of Thik and Thin. (Oh, but PPS, will you?)

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