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Thick and Thin (Part 19)
“Think I’m going to have a lie down guys, I’m beat.”
“Ok Dane I’ll be in later” Alice said softly as she watched Dana slowly make her way to the bedroom.
Shane watched Alice’s face as Dana left the kitchen and her heart ached for both of her friends who were going through hell. She turned to her friend who sat on the opposite side of the kitchen table.
“What you thinking Al?”
“I suppose certain things are just sinking in a bit.” Alice revealed
“Yeh?”
“Well after everything that’s happened to me in the past two months, all I concentrated on was getting better and getting home to Dana but now that that’s happened I’m still sore and tired and Dana…I just feel today that’s she’s been trying to make it look like she’s better than she is and she’s trying to make me better.”
“Well you would do the same in her position Al, she’s been miserable without you.”
“I know I know, I’m just scared. I guess I thought that everything would be fixed when I got home, I didn’t really process that Dana still has stage 3 breast cancer and after just three more weeks of chemo we have to sit and wait to see if it’s working.”
Alice started to tear up “After everything that’s happened I just don’t think I could survive if she didn’t make it and I can’t even take care of her the way I want to. She isn’t eating and drinking enough and she’s disappearing in front of me and don’t have the physical energy to make sure she keeps on top of everything.”
“I’m just letting her down when she’s done everything she can to help me and jeopardised her own health to come in and sit with me when I wasn’t even awake”
“Ok ok Al hang on, Sharon is here and is making sure Dana is eating and drinking as much as she can, I think she just wanted to give you guys some space today. It’s not easy having two stubborn invalids under one roof” Shane grinned then continued after taking Alice’s hand “We’re all here for you Al, you should probably still be in hospital and you need to look after yourself so that you can be there for Dana in the long run ok?”
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(47 votes, average: 3.72 out of 5)
I just read all chapters again to refresh my memory of this awesome story. I am so glad that you came back with another chapter. It is nice to see everyone pulling together to help both of them recover. Beautifull writing! Please continue…..Soon!
Yay I’m so glad you posted! I kept hoping you’d continue with this, and after a chapter like this you’d better keep writing! I still heart this story quite a bit and I don’t want to see it end this way!
Gemzo, thank you for answering my prayer. Did you write with the speed of light? This is the one and only current story with A & D both together disabled so to speak. It is really awesome to see the two of them fussing, loving and taking care of each other. In addition, there was Sharon being so understanding and looking after them. I believe this heavy duty story must be very difficult to write. Yet you manage to throw in some humor. I can just picture A “shuffled into the kitchen with her crutch under her right arm and a pair of sun shades on to block out the sun.” Poor A with a dent in her head but still hot as GI Jane. And then you continued with D asking Shane to look after A. I was in tears and am really worried about D for the next 3 weeks. I hope she would be able to pull through. And DO NOT let her die please. No dying for Ms. Dana in the world of fan fics. Please, please & please !!! TBC with the question mark. Not a chance! This story has substance and please continue. Danish needs you. I will comment as long as you will post. pps.
I second (third?) everyone else when I say that you should please continue. This is a very interesting story. I love how the girls take care of each other more than they do themselves. They really are devoted to one another. With the framily and Sharon they should pull through fine. That’s my subtle way of requesting that both girl’s survive to grow old together. Please?
Oaky…so I’m more than a month late, but please, Gem, keep writing. Believe me I hear ya on the whole life keeps interfering thing, so write when you can and post when you can and we’ll be here, eagerly awaiting the next part of Thik and Thin. (Oh, but PPS, will you?)