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Thinking Back Chapter 1
“Will you be back later?” asked the woman…… “Everyone around here is so cold, but you…….You are warm and caring, and I need that right now……”
“Yes, sure. I will be back later, maybe when I leave the office.” I said, forgetting about the impending date that I had already made…..
“Thanks..”
“No problem..” I turned and grabbed my purse from the chair and left.
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AT THE OFFICE: 3O MINUTES LATER:
I walk into the office, and immediately I am bombarded…….. “Miss Porter, Detective Sparks, from the Sheriff’s department called, they have someone that has come forward with a name of the victim….”
“Oh that is fabulous….” I say as I go into my office and pick the phone up to dial the station…..
“Detective Sparks please….Thank you….”
A few quick seconds pass as I tap my pen on my desk………
“Hello, This is detective Sparks, how may I help you?”
“Hi, Detective. This is Miss Porter from over at the solicitor’s office. I understand you have someone that has come with information about our hospital patient that was beaten?”
“Yes ma’am…..we do…….He is here now…..”
“Is there any way you could hold them until I get there….it won’t take me but 5 minutes…..”
“Yea, sure Miss Porter. I’ll keep him…..”
“Great…..Thanx…” I say as I hang the phone up and walk towards the door……
“Lore, I will be back soon……I am on my way to the Sherrif’s department…..”
“K, Boss…..”
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5 MINUTES LATER AT THE STATION:
“Detective Sparks, thank you so much for this…” I said as I walked into the main office……
“No problem, Miss Porter…Right this way…”
Upon entering the room, I noticed an older gentleman in maybe his late 60’s…..wearing old, tattered clothes…..
“Sir……HI……” I said as I walked around the table, and held my hand out……. “I am Miss Porter from the solicitors office……..I was told that you know the young lady in the article of the paper today…..”
“Yes ma’am, she is my daughter, Tina…….Tina Kennard…….” he said through tears……. “That low down dirty bastard, beat my daughter again, and tried to kill her this time…..”
“Ok…..first, I need his name……so that we can bring him in for questioning…….Could you give me that?” I asked…….
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griffen says
Yes, please continue….great start!
honda90 says
I’m on board!!!
curious says
got my attention
Seahurst says
You know I am always a sucker for a new B&T story! Thanks!
Brooke says
Please more…
dragon63 says
great start! please post again soon!!!
4everTB says
I love TiBette beginnings! please continue and post soon!!!
xxjoey6 says
He’ll Yeee count me in, liked it alot
skycaptain says
I like it alot…okay question…is this REALLY Tina’s family? Or are they back to finish the job? They might have thought they killed her. Why did it take them so long to come forward? Why wasn’t she reported missing? I am just suspicious like that….lol. Please continue.
skyblue says
Oh yeah… bring it on! I alway like B&T beginnings. Great starts, please post soon :)
snQQpy says
I like Tina with amnesia – please continue!!!
hansen says
Poor Tina and please continue…..
BetteAndTinaForever says
i think tina’s eyes light up because she saw bette…of course continue
Biased says
Please continue this story… another great B&T beginnng that is original.
NYGayLady says
Yeah, what Sea said. And I have this feeling T(ina) brightened when they walked in ’cause of Bette…
LadyD says
Please continue!
mysterious87 says
i think i would be stupid to tell you not to continue!!!! i loved it soo far and i cant wait to see where you take this!
StormyOne says
Oh yes please continue. Love TiBette beginnings
bettyvhall says
Just love anything that has B&T in it thanks
Emae29 says
Definitely continue! You should know by now that I love B&T beginnings! great start, btw!
ut says
This is intersting start and let see her reaction!!