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    Thoughts – Chapter 1

    Story written on October 1, 2007 by TwistedTempest.
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    Dana and Alice go over things in their minds as Dinah Shore goes on.

    Alice

    Her legs were as smooth as silk; I gently ran my hand over the toned muscles edging my way upwards. I inhaled, it was the sweetest scent ever but somehow familiar, I couldn’t quite place where I had smelt it before. My mind was in a haze, my heart was racing, I could feel my legs tremble as I drew another shaky breath I felt her hands on my lower back they were working there way down. Every millimetre her hands moved I could feel it in every nerve of my body. I started kissing her neck; she let out a moan of pleasure. I kissed a path down to her breasts as I felt the cotton of her shirt she moved her hands on to my ass and squeezed, I felt her hands travel back up towards my waistline and her fingers tucked into them, I lifted my head to look into her eyes…

    “Alice! Alice wake up we’re stopping if you need the bathroom you better go now.” Tina shouted from the front of the vehicle.

    “What?” I shot up and looked around. I suddenly realised where I was. Tina and my mom were up front and Shane and Jenny were just climbing out of the minivan and I was stretched out over Dana who was still asleep.

    “You better wake Dana up.” Shane shouted as she ran her fingers through her untamed locks.

    As I lifted my legs off Dana’s my mind drifted back to that dream, it had felt so real and so right. I reached over a shook Dana out her slumber.

    “Bathroom stop Dana.” I had to smile as she woke up unaware of where she was to start with.

    “Oh yeah right.” Dana replied as she tried to get her bearings. After we used the bathroom we grabbed something to eat out of burger king to eat back in the minivan, everyone wanted to get to Palm Springs as soon as we could so the party could get started. The rest of the journey I couldn’t get that dream out of my head. The minute we stepped out of the minivan we felt the atmosphere.

    “Hey Dana where is this rep or whatever you are meeting?” Shane yelled out. Dana stood with her mouth open as she watched the droves of lesbians that surrounded them.

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    1. great start. yes i think you should definitely continue. i would love to see what would have happened if dana got rid of tonya sooner than she did. in my mind – i always thought alice started having feeling for dana around this time anyway. if not before. it was just the appearance of tonya that made her think – wow i think i like my best friend.

    2. i think its great to and both of you together on a story…this is gona be amazing!lol please keep posting i cant wait to see what happens with tonya and how al and dana get together!pps

    3. What a great writing combination – and I love the stories which build up to the Danish love affair, and hopefully this one will loose Tonya … quickly. Looking forward to more.

    4. Should you continue… Hmmmmmmm… Lemme think… YES!!! This is a very interesting view on Danish and I can’t wait to see where you take it. That and two of my favorite authors make this a must-have. Great start to it, too. The Dinah Shore weekend was such a fun episode. And I love how you get into Dana’s thought process with Tonya. I feel bad for Dana in that she felt she couldn’t stop Tonya that first time they were together. I can see that being her thought process, though (about her career) — that and having someone so excited to be with her. I hope this doesn’t mean you are giving up on your other stories: “You” and “Living for Love”.

    5. Hats off to you both, MT & TT. I have always wondered about how A felt as D walked into the Planet with her new hair do and her blue tank top and jeans. A said, “Kate Moss, eat your heart out!” and then “You Look Great.” Then Shane said to A, “What’re you doing.” Cause, A was checking D out. I always felt the show should have expanded on that and gone in depth with A & D relationship. I sort of felt cheated. What you two dynamic duo are doing is fantastic. I am really glad that you decided to write this and please continue. As for the plot, I always thought D could not have been that stupid to be dating a money grabber. I love your explanation of how A & D felt at the time. The dreams they had in the car, priceless. To me, it made no sense that D even let Tonya move in. I could see a one night stand but moving in was absurd. Maybe A could have a heart to heart talk with D before things went out of hands as was on the show. Maybe then Mr. Piddles’ life would be spared. You two rock!!!!!

    7. umm should you continue…hmmm…HELL YES!! Love it! I would also like to echo what a few posts have already said, if you can get Danish together quicker, and get rid of Ton Ton faster than they did on the show! Anyway I am total fan! PPS

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