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    Thoughts – Chapter 1

    Story written on October 1, 2007 by TwistedTempest.
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    Dana and Alice go over things in their minds as Dinah Shore goes on.

    “Inside, we meet them inside.” Dana answered.

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    Dana

    I’d replied in a state just short of confusion, and answered Shane’s question without really thinking about it. I just…this will sound stupid, but I’d never seen so many lesbians in one spot before. The rest of the group was looking around like it was no big deal, but I couldn’t help feeling a little nervous anyway. Was I really going to have to give a speech in front of all these people?

    To say it was a sort of culture shock would have been an understatement Sure, I’d known I was gay for years, and hanging out with the group at the Planet had left little doubt as to my identity. Still, it was an entirely different matter to be standing at a place dubbed the “Spring Break for Lesbians.” I’d known these things existed, of course, but to actually be a featured guest at one was a little more than my brain could really process fully. I decided to keep my mouth shut and follow Tina, Shane and Al inside.

    Alice had pulled her travel camera out of her pocket and started snapping pictures of our surroundings before I had the chance to process it much further. Watching her, my mind kept flashing back to the dream I’d been in the middle of when she woke me up. Her skin had felt so soft, so real…I’d been so sure it wasn’t a dream, that I was finally getting what I’d been wishing for all through the years I’d been friends with her.

    I’d been holding her the way I’d always wanted to, but never had the guts to say to her. My hands had been exploring under her shirt, reaching just past the waistline of her pants as she kissed my neck. I’d let out a gasp – and that had been the end of it. I didn’t get to see what would have happened next, and looking at her in the lobby of this posh hotel, I knew I probably never would. There was no way I’d ever be good enough for her, and I’d made my peace with that…for the most part.

    I knew this weekend was a huge step for me. I was newly outed and finally getting some attention for my career and being honoured like this at the Dinah Shore weekend of all places was huge. Bigger than huge, really. I felt like I finally had a license to be myself, and I was getting honoured for it. It still blew me away, but in the back of my mind, all I could think about was all the years before this, when I’d been dreaming of the day I’d be out so I could finally tell Alice how I felt about her. How I’d felt from the day we first met, when I’d decided that it’d be way too cruel of me to try to be with her while I was still so deep in the closet.

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    1. great start. yes i think you should definitely continue. i would love to see what would have happened if dana got rid of tonya sooner than she did. in my mind – i always thought alice started having feeling for dana around this time anyway. if not before. it was just the appearance of tonya that made her think – wow i think i like my best friend.

    2. i think its great to and both of you together on a story…this is gona be amazing!lol please keep posting i cant wait to see what happens with tonya and how al and dana get together!pps

    3. What a great writing combination – and I love the stories which build up to the Danish love affair, and hopefully this one will loose Tonya … quickly. Looking forward to more.

    4. Should you continue… Hmmmmmmm… Lemme think… YES!!! This is a very interesting view on Danish and I can’t wait to see where you take it. That and two of my favorite authors make this a must-have. Great start to it, too. The Dinah Shore weekend was such a fun episode. And I love how you get into Dana’s thought process with Tonya. I feel bad for Dana in that she felt she couldn’t stop Tonya that first time they were together. I can see that being her thought process, though (about her career) — that and having someone so excited to be with her. I hope this doesn’t mean you are giving up on your other stories: “You” and “Living for Love”.

    5. Hats off to you both, MT & TT. I have always wondered about how A felt as D walked into the Planet with her new hair do and her blue tank top and jeans. A said, “Kate Moss, eat your heart out!” and then “You Look Great.” Then Shane said to A, “What’re you doing.” Cause, A was checking D out. I always felt the show should have expanded on that and gone in depth with A & D relationship. I sort of felt cheated. What you two dynamic duo are doing is fantastic. I am really glad that you decided to write this and please continue. As for the plot, I always thought D could not have been that stupid to be dating a money grabber. I love your explanation of how A & D felt at the time. The dreams they had in the car, priceless. To me, it made no sense that D even let Tonya move in. I could see a one night stand but moving in was absurd. Maybe A could have a heart to heart talk with D before things went out of hands as was on the show. Maybe then Mr. Piddles’ life would be spared. You two rock!!!!!

    7. umm should you continue…hmmm…HELL YES!! Love it! I would also like to echo what a few posts have already said, if you can get Danish together quicker, and get rid of Ton Ton faster than they did on the show! Anyway I am total fan! PPS

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