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    Thoughts – Chapter 1

    Story written on October 1, 2007 by TwistedTempest.
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    Dana and Alice go over things in their minds as Dinah Shore goes on.

    I was still gazing at her, thinking about all of this when a very poofy-haired woman with rather large breasts bounced our way, announcing herself perkily and saying she was there to take care of my “every need.” I shot a terrified glance at Shane and saw her grin as the strange Tonya person walked away. Tina just scoffed as Alice decided to snap a picture.

    “Does that thing come with batteries, Dana?” she asked snarkily, leading the way to our room. I couldn’t think of answer quickly enough, and decided to follow along silently. I had way too much to be concerned with what with the appearances I’d be making all weekend, and I knew I didn’t have time to dwell on my best friend the way I’d been. Still, when we got to the room, all I could seem to think about was her.

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    Alice

    What the fuck was that, I thought to myself as what I can only describe as an over energized robotic like person grabbed a hold of Dana. Oh my god was she flirting with Dana, I had to look around to see if the rest of the group were seeing this and as I saw the look on Shane’s face, I let out a giggle. I thought to myself guest liaison here to take care of all your needs yeah right. We were showed to our room it was a small room considering that five people were to sleep here. We stood on the balcony taking in the sight of the hundreds of greased up and ready to go women below. Dana was in the bathroom getting ready for a photo shot. She walked out wearing a white suit.

    "Guys, Guys. Is this suit too conservative I brought a dress, tell me what you think?" Dana came out the bathroom asking. Shane and I came in from the balcony I stood there looking at Dana; I had to admit she did look great in that suit.

    "The suits great" Tina answered. But my eyes were still fixed on Dana.

    There was a knock at the door and when I went and answered the crazy lady entered. I stood girthing at Tonya flirting with Dana. Tonya handed me some passes for the events and then her and Dana left. While Dana was away doing here photo shoot we hit the bar beside the pool, I still had my camera and was snapping away, after that we went to a white party when Jenny decided to leave us at that point and go in her own direction, Shane Tina and I never stayed too long at the party before we headed back up to the room. Shane checked to see if Jenny was ok before we left. When we got the room we lay in the bed with old movies on drinking and stuffing our face. I lay on the bed not really paying attention to what was on the TV instead I found myself thinking of what Dana was doing. I decided to call her to see where she was.

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    1. great start. yes i think you should definitely continue. i would love to see what would have happened if dana got rid of tonya sooner than she did. in my mind – i always thought alice started having feeling for dana around this time anyway. if not before. it was just the appearance of tonya that made her think – wow i think i like my best friend.

    2. i think its great to and both of you together on a story…this is gona be amazing!lol please keep posting i cant wait to see what happens with tonya and how al and dana get together!pps

    3. What a great writing combination – and I love the stories which build up to the Danish love affair, and hopefully this one will loose Tonya … quickly. Looking forward to more.

    4. Should you continue… Hmmmmmmm… Lemme think… YES!!! This is a very interesting view on Danish and I can’t wait to see where you take it. That and two of my favorite authors make this a must-have. Great start to it, too. The Dinah Shore weekend was such a fun episode. And I love how you get into Dana’s thought process with Tonya. I feel bad for Dana in that she felt she couldn’t stop Tonya that first time they were together. I can see that being her thought process, though (about her career) — that and having someone so excited to be with her. I hope this doesn’t mean you are giving up on your other stories: “You” and “Living for Love”.

    5. Hats off to you both, MT & TT. I have always wondered about how A felt as D walked into the Planet with her new hair do and her blue tank top and jeans. A said, “Kate Moss, eat your heart out!” and then “You Look Great.” Then Shane said to A, “What’re you doing.” Cause, A was checking D out. I always felt the show should have expanded on that and gone in depth with A & D relationship. I sort of felt cheated. What you two dynamic duo are doing is fantastic. I am really glad that you decided to write this and please continue. As for the plot, I always thought D could not have been that stupid to be dating a money grabber. I love your explanation of how A & D felt at the time. The dreams they had in the car, priceless. To me, it made no sense that D even let Tonya move in. I could see a one night stand but moving in was absurd. Maybe A could have a heart to heart talk with D before things went out of hands as was on the show. Maybe then Mr. Piddles’ life would be spared. You two rock!!!!!

    7. umm should you continue…hmmm…HELL YES!! Love it! I would also like to echo what a few posts have already said, if you can get Danish together quicker, and get rid of Ton Ton faster than they did on the show! Anyway I am total fan! PPS

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