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Time Heals All Wounds, Ch. 4
Carmen got out and come up beside her. “I can’t believe this is ours,” she said, echoing Shane’s thoughts. “Look at that backyard. When I was a kid, I would have loved to have an area that big to play in. That yard is perfect for kids.”
Shane shifted uncomfortably. Is that supposed to be a hint or something? She cleared her throat. “You’re right.”
Carmen caught her look. “I’m not suggesting anything right now. I’m just saying, ya know, maybe one day”
Smiling, Shane said, “I know what you mean.” Gazing thoughtfully at the house, she said, “You know, if I ever were to have any kids, I think I’d like to adopt one. There are so many kids out there in foster care andthat’s usually not a good place to be. I’ve seen what can happen. I’ve been there. No kid deserves that. Kids are innocent, and they deserve to be treated better than that.” Her tone was soft and sad, tinged with a bit of wistfulness.
Carmen took her hand and squeezed it reassuringly as Shane added, “But I’d be a ***** parent anyway, so whatever.”
“No, you wouldn’t,” Carmen protested loudly, pulling Shane close to her. “Any kid would be lucky to have you. You just don’t want to admit it.”
“Maybe,” Shane conceded, tugging Carmen’s hand as they headed toward their new home. “I’m practically gonna be neighbors with Bette and Tina again. That’s kinda cool, except they might stick us with more babysitting duty.” She unlocked the door and put a hand to Carmen’s chest, stopping her from entering. “Hold on, I wanna do this right.” She bent slightly at the knee, placing one arm behind Carmen’s leg.
“What? You’re kidding me, right? You can’t pick me up,” Carmen said in disbelief.
“Why not? I held your ***** up in the air with one arm before, in case you’ve forgotten,” Shane reminded her, hooking Carmen’s arm around her neck.
“Yeah, but that – whoa!” Carmen’s reply was interrupted as her feet were swept out from underneath her and she fell heavily into Shane’s arms. “Baby, your shoulder! You’re going to hurt it again!”
“It’s fine,” Shane told her, grunting slightly as they lurched through the doorstep together. With a satisfied smile, she set Carmen back down on her feet and pretended to dust her hands off. “Told you I could do it.”
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(41 votes, average: 3.66 out of 5)
911 ! poor Kit!
Another wonderful update, I love Shane and Carmen getting involved in Alice and Dana’s problems. I like your Carmen more than what was given in the show, at least I understand her more. Now what’s gonna happen with Danish?
fuck..when some good news in B&T lives will show up???..htye need a break and happy news..and now Kit is having a stroke????…great chappy post soon thanks
Shit this is bad and hope Kit be ok, let see what’s next, thanks!
I can’t believe I didn’t notice “All Shook Up” and the sequal “Time Heals All Wounds” until last night?! Incredible stories! During the earthquake and the aftermath of it, I was biting my nails lol. :p When Shane held up Carmen, I was pretty much saying the mantra of “don’t let Carmen and Shane die, don’t let them die.” When both Jenny and Lara died it was just heartbreaking. I thought for sure Tina was a goner when that fridge landed on her. I can understand and relate to her depression after Jenny died saving her.
Onto happier things in this sequal: :D
I love that Shane got Jenny’s lifeinsurance money, although it’s sad. And that Shane and Carmen buying a house together, and their talks about backyards and kids maybe in the future – awesome scenes! I’m a Sharmen fan if you couldn’t tell already lol. I hope Shane talks to Carmen about her fears. And Alice really needs to be honest with Dana, sheesh. Good that she wants to give her fiancé space and all, but there should be limits lol. And lastly I hope there’s nothing too serious with Kit; just exhaustion or something.
Great fics! You really know how to make the reader think the characters are really f***ed, and then they walk away with just a dislocated shoulder or something haha. Nice writing skills. Very suspenseful. 5 stars for ya! :D Oh, and I LOVE LOVE the quick updates!!
there is still some big shit going on here and I just hope that alice and dana talk and that alice will tell dana the truth about how long she will be gone for please post soon I love it
I love your updates!!
Heart attack or what? dont let anything happen to Kit. Maybe this will snap Tina out of her slump. Alice shouldn’t lie to Dana. thanks