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Time Heals All Wounds, Ch. 4
Alice pulled her new lime green Volkswagen Beetle into the driveway and came to a quick stop, throwing the car into park and leaping out, not even turning it off or closing the door. “*****!” she cursed aloud, turning and running back to turn the car off and shut the door.
“Dana!” she shouted excitedly, bursting in and waving the CD in her hand. Not seeing anyone or hearing a response, she repeated, “Dana! Honey?”
A quick search proved no one was there. She found a note on the table in Dana’s meticulous print:
“Al-
Gone out for a few minutes.
Love,
Me.”
“Okay, me,” Alice told the note, grinning. She let it flutter back to the table as she eagerly took her CD to the stereo and popped in the disc. Stabbing the play button with her finger, she smiled even more as the sound of her guitar came over the speakers. Letting out a small squeal of excitement, she bounced in around in place.
Shane leaned in and kissed Carmen, drawing her curvy body in close. “Ya know, we’re going to have to christen this place,” she murmured into the kiss, her hand slowly drawing circles on Carmen’s lower back.
She could feel Carmen smile into the kiss. “You’re right. But when?” Carmen’s tone was teasing as her hands slipped under Shane’s shirt to caress her flat stomach.
Shane shivered slightly as she began kissing along Carmen’s jaw line up to her ear. “Now’s as a good time as any,” she whispered huskily, seeing goose bumps rise on Carmen’s skin as her hot breath tickled her ear.
“But we don’t have a bed or anything,” Carmen bantered back, her fingers walking their way up towards Shane’s *****.
As Carmen’s fingers brushed her nipple, Shane let out a low growl. “What’s wrong with the floor?”
Carmen giggled and gently nipped at Shane’s lower lip with her teeth. Shane’s hands had now drifted lower and had unzipped Carmen’s pants. Carmen gasped as she felt Shane’s hand slip below her panties and make contact with the curly hair at the apex of her thighs. “Absolutely nothing. The floor’s wonderful,” Carmen gasped, letting Shane pull her down to the carpet.
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(41 votes, average: 3.66 out of 5)
911 ! poor Kit!
Another wonderful update, I love Shane and Carmen getting involved in Alice and Dana’s problems. I like your Carmen more than what was given in the show, at least I understand her more. Now what’s gonna happen with Danish?
fuck..when some good news in B&T lives will show up???..htye need a break and happy news..and now Kit is having a stroke????…great chappy post soon thanks
Shit this is bad and hope Kit be ok, let see what’s next, thanks!
I can’t believe I didn’t notice “All Shook Up” and the sequal “Time Heals All Wounds” until last night?! Incredible stories! During the earthquake and the aftermath of it, I was biting my nails lol. :p When Shane held up Carmen, I was pretty much saying the mantra of “don’t let Carmen and Shane die, don’t let them die.” When both Jenny and Lara died it was just heartbreaking. I thought for sure Tina was a goner when that fridge landed on her. I can understand and relate to her depression after Jenny died saving her.
Onto happier things in this sequal: :D
I love that Shane got Jenny’s lifeinsurance money, although it’s sad. And that Shane and Carmen buying a house together, and their talks about backyards and kids maybe in the future – awesome scenes! I’m a Sharmen fan if you couldn’t tell already lol. I hope Shane talks to Carmen about her fears. And Alice really needs to be honest with Dana, sheesh. Good that she wants to give her fiancé space and all, but there should be limits lol. And lastly I hope there’s nothing too serious with Kit; just exhaustion or something.
Great fics! You really know how to make the reader think the characters are really f***ed, and then they walk away with just a dislocated shoulder or something haha. Nice writing skills. Very suspenseful. 5 stars for ya! :D Oh, and I LOVE LOVE the quick updates!!
there is still some big shit going on here and I just hope that alice and dana talk and that alice will tell dana the truth about how long she will be gone for please post soon I love it
I love your updates!!
Heart attack or what? dont let anything happen to Kit. Maybe this will snap Tina out of her slump. Alice shouldn’t lie to Dana. thanks