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Time Heals All Wounds, Ch. 4
Her blush receding, Dana looked at the floor and bit down on her bottom lip. “I was just hoping to, um, talk to you guys aboutsomething.”
“That something wouldn’t be Alice, would it?” Shane asked.
“Um, maybe,” Dana replied, the expression on her face telling Shane that it was exactly what she wanted to talk about.
“I’d offer you a seat, but we don’t have any furniture yet,” Carmen joked, hoping to relax Dana a little.
“That’s okay,” Dana said quickly.
“So what’s wrong with you two now?” Shane asked. “She doesn’t seem to be smothering you anymore.”
“That’s just it,” Dana began, looking uncertain. “I think I almost kind ofmiss that.”
“Well, which is it, Dana? Either you want your space or you don’t,” Shane pointed out.
“I do want my space. I need my space,” Dana clarified. “Alice just became so dependant on me and now suddenlyshe’s not. She’s got other things to do, you know, with working on Kit’s album and all. It’s hard to get used to her not hanging around me all the time.”
“You feel ignored,” Carmen supplied helpfully.
Realization dawned on Dana’s face. “Yeah, I do. Well, not really ignored, butmaybe needed, is that what I’m trying to say? That’s not just it, either, though. It’s just that after Tonya and then Alice, I got so used to being so close to her and around her constantly, and then having her dependant on me and clingy, and then having” Dana trailed off. “Well, her fawning over me, I guess. Yeah, I do feel ignored. And slightly unappreciated. I just got so used to feeling needed that it’s confusing.”
“It’s good that Alice has an interest and a life other than just you,” Shane pointed out. “It’s healthy.”
“I just don’t want us to grow apart,” Dana admitted softly.
“And you won’t, as long as you guys take the time to sit down and talk about everything,” Carmen reassured her.
“Yeah, like I’ve been trying to get you to do for days now,” Shane added.
“You’re right. I’m just afraid of starting an argument,” Dana confessed.
“You still need to do it,” Carmen insisted.
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(41 votes, average: 3.66 out of 5)
911 ! poor Kit!
Another wonderful update, I love Shane and Carmen getting involved in Alice and Dana’s problems. I like your Carmen more than what was given in the show, at least I understand her more. Now what’s gonna happen with Danish?
fuck..when some good news in B&T lives will show up???..htye need a break and happy news..and now Kit is having a stroke????…great chappy post soon thanks
Shit this is bad and hope Kit be ok, let see what’s next, thanks!
I can’t believe I didn’t notice “All Shook Up” and the sequal “Time Heals All Wounds” until last night?! Incredible stories! During the earthquake and the aftermath of it, I was biting my nails lol. :p When Shane held up Carmen, I was pretty much saying the mantra of “don’t let Carmen and Shane die, don’t let them die.” When both Jenny and Lara died it was just heartbreaking. I thought for sure Tina was a goner when that fridge landed on her. I can understand and relate to her depression after Jenny died saving her.
Onto happier things in this sequal: :D
I love that Shane got Jenny’s lifeinsurance money, although it’s sad. And that Shane and Carmen buying a house together, and their talks about backyards and kids maybe in the future – awesome scenes! I’m a Sharmen fan if you couldn’t tell already lol. I hope Shane talks to Carmen about her fears. And Alice really needs to be honest with Dana, sheesh. Good that she wants to give her fiancé space and all, but there should be limits lol. And lastly I hope there’s nothing too serious with Kit; just exhaustion or something.
Great fics! You really know how to make the reader think the characters are really f***ed, and then they walk away with just a dislocated shoulder or something haha. Nice writing skills. Very suspenseful. 5 stars for ya! :D Oh, and I LOVE LOVE the quick updates!!
there is still some big shit going on here and I just hope that alice and dana talk and that alice will tell dana the truth about how long she will be gone for please post soon I love it
I love your updates!!
Heart attack or what? dont let anything happen to Kit. Maybe this will snap Tina out of her slump. Alice shouldn’t lie to Dana. thanks