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    Timid Devotion (Part 13)

    Story written on March 24, 2009 by biissexi.
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    “Poooor Tina,” Alice chuckled into the phone, “She looks like a deer caught in the headlights!”

    "Okay, what’s happening?" Bette asked, overwhelmed with jealousy and a protective nature over Tina.

    Alice wasn’t sure if she should tell Bette. She was worried her head would be bitten off. "Umm …"

    "Don’t umm me, Alice," Bette insisted. "Why don’t you help her? She’s your friend too, isn’t she?"

    "But then they’ll know that I’ve been watching, and-"

    "Help her!" Bette whispered, trying not to be so loud.

    "How the fuck do I do that?" Alice nearly squealed, shifting her eyes when she noticed a few people giving her looks for being too noisy.

    "I don’t care," Bette said, rubbing her head, "She’s just really new to all of this, okay? I know I sound crazy, but she’s just really vulnerable. Just … just pretend you’re with her or something."

    Alice gasped, "How dare you-" she started, feigning shock at Bette’s assumption that she would be involved with something like that.

    "Alice," Bette started, knowing she was usually fine with it.

    "Yeah yeah," Alice started, closing her laptop, "But if she hates me from now on, it’s your fault."

    "Call me back."

    "Or we might just drive away to Mexico together," Alice smirked, "She might go for me."

    "Will you just go!"

    "I’m goin! I’m goin!"

    They each hung up and Alice nervously got up and started over to Tina and the mystery woman. She stood about a foot away and cleared her throat awkwardly. Both women turned with confusion – Tina watching with a smile as well.

    "Alice?" Tina asked, trying to hold back her laughter at the way Alice was acting. ‘Even stranger than usual,’ she thought to herself.

    "Yes, hello lover," Alice smiled, immitating Carrie from Sex and the City and she looked over to the other woman and scowled.

    "Umm … what the hell are you doing?" Tina asked with laughter in her voice.

    "Well, you seemed to be speaking with this …" she started, somehow bringing about a mixed accent along with her act. "… And I was worried about you."

    "Alice," Tina laughed, "Seriously, what are you doing?"

    "I could ask the same of you," Alice insisted, staring at the other woman who also showed confusion and looked to Tina.

    "I don’t know if everyone is hitting on me all at once for a joke or what, but I’m just really not interested in either of you," she chuckled, still waiting on the drink she had ordered as she waited on the bar stool.

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    3. A jealous Bette, hummm, is that safe??? Alice is priceless. It’s nice that Tina put Bette at ease about her being able to handle herself against being hit on and that she’s with Bette now. Great update as usual. PPS

    7. that was so cute and funny…they tried to detour me today coming to my desk but I completely ignored them as if I was doing work so they turned around and walked away and I enjoyed reading one of my fanfic favs…YEAH!

    9. “yes,hello lover” lmao this was such a fun chapter. Poor Bette for having to sit on the edge but i think Tina handled the situation pretty well. thanks for the smiles.

    12. ahhhh…I thought Bette was going to jump through the phoneline for a minute. She was so jealous and protective. Alice stole the show though. How freakin’ funny to torment Bette more by telling her the woman had her arm around Tina’s chair. I’m still LOL! Can’t wait for their next meeting…

    13. Ha the green eye of jealousy!! Bette is so cute when she’s jealous and protective. Loved how Tina teased her back too!! Is it time for them to see one another again yet?? PPS:)

    14. How cute was Bette, so jealous,and couldnt do a thing about it. Getting Alice as a stand in girlfriend, that was so like alice to act like she was from England and bet that the lovly lady was Helena.

    15. hahahaha Alice! so funny… love this story as you already know thanks for the updates can’t wait to see what happens to cute jealous Bette! i love that Tina called her while in the middle of who I am assuming is Helena and Alice

    17. They are so cute and Alice is her usual self, so noisy and naughty, but very helpful in situations like this. You wrote her character beautifully. Thank you Cami, I love your story and I am looking forward to when they take their relationship to the next level. Thanks again. Have a wonderful Friday.

    19. Awwww, they’ve got it so bad already and just too darn cute. Jealous Bette, or shall I say, jealous and overly protective is amusing. I’m assuming the british accented brunette is Helena, of course. Hope Bette can back her off because when she wants someone she really goes after it. Loved the update. Post when you can.

    20. the reactions of Bette and Tina are so spot on. For T, the first time being hit on by a girl is so daunting isnt it? But I loved how she handled it and through that, she showed where her interest lies…as for B jealousy..its so easy to worry about a “newbie” such as T…great chapter babe, as always…I got a massive smile on my face….cause now I get to read oyur other kick ass story.Thanks for the post…regardless of how long it takes to get out…we still love it more and more..mwah

    22. I loved Tina in this chapter – wondering what these women were doing fighting over her. She is certainly becoming more comfortable with things – and teasing Bette about being jealous and getting Bette to admit it – so good ! I just love your stories – thank you for providing us with such light hearted, loving and relatively drama free (not that i am asking for any) stories! PPS

    23. This was so funny… alice with an accent and not knowing what she needed to do. Jealous Bette! :) Great update… so cute! Can’t wait for the next update! Thank you!

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