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    Timid Devotion (Part 13)

    Story written on March 24, 2009 by biissexi.
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    “Poooor Tina,” Alice chuckled into the phone, “She looks like a deer caught in the headlights!”

    "Well you have your people call my people," Alice continued as she spoke with the mystery woman, obviously terrible at the act.

    Tina dropped her head in her hands.

    "Oh, well what’s their number?" the woman asked with a British accent that put Alice’s to shame.

    "They don’t … uhhh … have a … phone number," Alice said with attitude and Tina chuckled again, getting out her phone.

    "This is ridiculous," Tina laughed to herself as she dialed, feeling trapped between the two women and having to wait for her order.

    "Ooh good one," the woman smiled, noticing Tina’s wish to escape. "Hey, I can drive you to where you’re going if you want," the woman offered, watching Alice start to shift on her feet and move her head around strategically.

    "No," Tina started quietly with her phone in the other hand, "No thanks."

    "Oh, so this is how it’s gonna be?!" Alice started, stretching her neck.

    "Are you … is this supposed to be you starting a fight with me?" the woman laughed, shaking her head.

    "Bette," Tina whispered when she finally picked up, "I don’t know what the hell is going on, but there are two women who won’t take no for an answer, and one of them is Alice."

    "Fucking Alice," Bette mumbled, "Can you just leave?"

    "Not really," Tina continued, feeling she could hardly speak over the other women’s voices as she started chuckling, "I have to wait for my order."

    "I wish there was something I could do," Bette wondered aloud, looking around her office.

    Just as she was thinking, she heard Tina’s voice on the other end.

    "Ooh! That’s mine!" she explained to the server, taking her drink and nodding, having paid in advance. "Thank you."

    Bette smiled and let out a sigh.

    Alice backed away as Tina got off the barstool and the woman just watched her leave the building, appreciating the view.

    "I’m all about to start something up in here," Alice stumbled, trying to sound intimidating.

    The woman just smiled, "And what about your girlfriend?" she asked, gesturing over to Tina who was leaving alone.

    Alice looked to the side and shrugged, "Yeah, good one."

    The brunette furrowed her brows and shrugged before turning back around.

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    3. A jealous Bette, hummm, is that safe??? Alice is priceless. It’s nice that Tina put Bette at ease about her being able to handle herself against being hit on and that she’s with Bette now. Great update as usual. PPS

    7. that was so cute and funny…they tried to detour me today coming to my desk but I completely ignored them as if I was doing work so they turned around and walked away and I enjoyed reading one of my fanfic favs…YEAH!

    9. “yes,hello lover” lmao this was such a fun chapter. Poor Bette for having to sit on the edge but i think Tina handled the situation pretty well. thanks for the smiles.

    12. ahhhh…I thought Bette was going to jump through the phoneline for a minute. She was so jealous and protective. Alice stole the show though. How freakin’ funny to torment Bette more by telling her the woman had her arm around Tina’s chair. I’m still LOL! Can’t wait for their next meeting…

    13. Ha the green eye of jealousy!! Bette is so cute when she’s jealous and protective. Loved how Tina teased her back too!! Is it time for them to see one another again yet?? PPS:)

    14. How cute was Bette, so jealous,and couldnt do a thing about it. Getting Alice as a stand in girlfriend, that was so like alice to act like she was from England and bet that the lovly lady was Helena.

    15. hahahaha Alice! so funny… love this story as you already know thanks for the updates can’t wait to see what happens to cute jealous Bette! i love that Tina called her while in the middle of who I am assuming is Helena and Alice

    17. They are so cute and Alice is her usual self, so noisy and naughty, but very helpful in situations like this. You wrote her character beautifully. Thank you Cami, I love your story and I am looking forward to when they take their relationship to the next level. Thanks again. Have a wonderful Friday.

    19. Awwww, they’ve got it so bad already and just too darn cute. Jealous Bette, or shall I say, jealous and overly protective is amusing. I’m assuming the british accented brunette is Helena, of course. Hope Bette can back her off because when she wants someone she really goes after it. Loved the update. Post when you can.

    20. the reactions of Bette and Tina are so spot on. For T, the first time being hit on by a girl is so daunting isnt it? But I loved how she handled it and through that, she showed where her interest lies…as for B jealousy..its so easy to worry about a “newbie” such as T…great chapter babe, as always…I got a massive smile on my face….cause now I get to read oyur other kick ass story.Thanks for the post…regardless of how long it takes to get out…we still love it more and more..mwah

    22. I loved Tina in this chapter – wondering what these women were doing fighting over her. She is certainly becoming more comfortable with things – and teasing Bette about being jealous and getting Bette to admit it – so good ! I just love your stories – thank you for providing us with such light hearted, loving and relatively drama free (not that i am asking for any) stories! PPS

    23. This was so funny… alice with an accent and not knowing what she needed to do. Jealous Bette! :) Great update… so cute! Can’t wait for the next update! Thank you!

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