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Timid Devotion (Part 16)
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"Aww hunny," Bette smiled, pulling Tina in. "Please don’t feel bad about any of that, okay?"
Tina pouted and tried to pull away, "I’m even teasing you right now."
"Come here," Bette chuckled, pulling Tina back in to her, "I’ll survive. And besides, it’s not your fault that you’re so attractive."
Tina relaxed in the comfort of Bette’s arms. "I love you." She smiled at her ability to admit it.
"I love you too," Bette smiled, holding Tina’s head against her shoulder. "And relax, okay? Just be yourself and do what you want. You don’t have to worry so much. I love the little tease that you are."
Tina slapped her on the arm playfully with a smile. "Heyyy."
"And I want you to know that I like waiting, okay?" Bette said, looking into those hazel eyes, "I’m not ready until you are, T."
That made Tina smile, while trying to hide it.
"I love you and I will wait forever if I have to, okay? Just don’t rush yourself."
"Well I’d say I look pretty ready right now," Tina laughed, looking down at herself in just a white towel.
"Very funny," Bette chuckled, kissing her on the head. "I’m gonna jump in the shower too. You can change in here."
"Okay," Tina smiled, nodding her head. "See you in a bit."
Once Tina was left alone, an endless stream of thoughts started to flow through her mind. ‘Why am I not ready yet? I love her so much. What’s happening with me? Why am I so nervous about it? Maybe I should just do it. No, I can’t just do it. That’s not the way it’s supposed to be. If she’s so sexy and I want her so much, why do I still feel hesitant? Ahhh this is so damn frustrating. Women.’
She had been sitting there for a while, and lost track of time. She was laying on Bette’s bed on her side, facing away from the door. She still had the towel draped over her, but she was so lost in her thoughts that she had forgotten to change.
Bette had come back from her shower feeling much better and refreshed – that is, until she looked over to her beautiful girlfriend’s form, laying on her bed. She swallowed hard and held her towel even tighter to her body. She smiled, watching the breaths the blonde took and how they affected the shift of her body. She figured Tina was either thinking heavily about something or sleeping. Slowly, she tip toed back and closed the door partially, standing back in the hall before knocking to aware Tina of her presence. She didn’t want Tina to think she had just seen her.
She cleared her throat, "Tina?"
"Sorry," Tina said, the sound of her springing up from the bed evident. Bette held back her laughter.
"It’s okay," Bette smiled, putting her hands on her hips, "Can I come in?"
"Sure," Tina smiled, opening the door in her dress.
Bette’s mouth dropped, not only at how attractive Tina was in the dress, but her ability to change so quickly. ‘Damn,’ she thought to herself.
"Sorry I took so long," Tina smiled, taking her towel with her on her way out the door.
"… Not at all," Bette said in amazement, her eyes following Tina as she walked out into the hall.
"Where do I put this?" the blonde asked, holding up the wet towel.
"Uhh … there’s a laundry basket for it just down the hall," Bette said, shaking her head in confusion.
"Okay."
Tina walked off, giving Bette her privacy. The brunette closed the door and got ready as well, disappointed she didn’t have such quick ability. ‘What did she do, jump into the dress?’
Tina sat on the couch in the living room, flipping through a magazine until Bette was done changing. She smiled up at Bette’s stylistic choices.
"You look so hot," Tina smirked, throwing her magazine beside her on the couch.
"You … you look hot," Bette said quietly, hoping Tina wouldn’t see how aroused she was. She pulled her in for a hug, feeling that Tina’s hair was still slightly damp. Bette closed her eyes with a smile, suddenly remembering how quickly Tina had changed and that she must not have anything on underneath. She held her breath with that thought. ‘All I would have to do is run my hand under her dress and-’
"So are you ready?" Tina asked excitedly, "Let’s go out!"
"Well, it’s a little early. Do you wanna go to dinner first?"
"Sure," Tina beamed.
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I really hope that Tina will be ready soon. I don’t know how much longer Bette can hold out. Bette is being really sweet though, I love how she is so patient. =) PPS!!
OMG! How is Bette surviving all this endless teasing??? I am so in awe of her patience. Tina will be absolutely kicking herself for waiting so long once she finally conquers her apprehension. I just want to say…the erotic dancing is going to kill me!!! AGGHHHH! Bring it on!!!
Amazing amazing amazing writing!!! OHHHH Tina PLEASE be ready!!!! I can’t wait!!! Poor Bette! :) PPS!!!
OoooOOOooo…They’re going dancing with Tina commando? Bette’s in for the time of her life! I liked Alice’s voicemails…Haha
This is an achingly slow burn…but I like it!!!!!!
I was just thinkin’….could you give me ample warning when you decide to post “the deed”? You know I’m going to end up on the floor and I’d rather get there and wait for it than fall. LMAO
Tina may be Superman’s daughter with the ability to change that fast and in turn being Bette’s Kryptonite!
Good gracious alive, what is Tina doing to Bette. Both are going to melt into a puddle of butter with love as a topping. Maybe it is time to stretch a little further on Tina’s end of the deal.
That was great and hope Tina will be ready for the next chapter cause she is killing Bette and us here lol. Please post more, thanks!
is tina going to be ready in the next chapter or you’re still in the mood to torture us a little bit more? :) lovely update!
I’m glad that you have them taking their time. Tina still has a couple things to sort out. Soon it will fall into place, but no more advice from Alice. :) Thanks for posting!
love it, love it, love it!!
Bette is being really good! i wonder who will crack first!:)
Alice is so funny. I hope Tina gives Bette some loving some, before she explodes. They are both dressed to kill. Great post. PPS
hmmm why is tina not ready and what does she not have on under her dress….humorous
Let the teasing continue over dinner…
Brilliant Chapter – Really enjoying this story, and I say torture us some more…Imao – Its so fun to read! PPVS xx
Oh man! I don’t know who’s getting tortured .. Bette or us :) Are you going to allow them and us to finally get some relief. Thank you for posting and glad you’re feeling better :)
Wow..how do you make them so breathless,with so little effort?! It’s just keeps getting better and better..but phew!! Talk about some foreplay!! I don’t think poor Bette’s gonna make it!! And I don’t think she even really wants to at this point. Thank you my friend!!
I am such a fan! I always feel a bit happier when I see you’ve updated… Inspire me to sit down and try to write something! Anyways greatbupdate as always… I wonder what tuna said to alice? Thanks for updating!
I meant Tina by the way not tuna LOL typing on a phone is difficult apologies LOL
i love ittttttttttttt. listrn i dont thing i ever been teased like ur doinh to us in my life. bette is amazing and tina is so sweet and innocent its so lovely how bette is keeping her safe. torture us a little bit more plssssss
I actually like your teasing)))
ok I am bette to crack first…these two are lovely but killing each other or at least one of them are…Alice is being Alice…so I wonder what holding Tina back..?? Then again maybe a twirl on the dance floor with her Bette will push her in the right direction..
I bet Tina cracks first…it will be Bette’s reward for all that will-power and restraint. She does deserve an award!
Tina’s more than ready, except Alice probabaly scared the crap outta her with her advice, and Tina knowing Bette’s past probably isn’t helping either, she’s just scared she won’t please her woman the way she knows she’s gonna be pleased! Wonder how torturous dinner is gonna be…and what’s really for dessert?? PPS:)
So, she has probably never had an orgasm, huh? Interesting! Something to look forward to..
there is nothing wrong with waiting but what is alice up to? :)PPS
Aweosme as always….and its so interesting, with the two stories…how different the characters are. I am impressed you don’t get confused…lol…but I like the progress of this story, and they are so super sweet together…thanks again Bi…xxx