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    Timid Devotion (Part 16)

    Story written on April 10, 2009 by biissexi.
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    “I’m not ready until you are, T.”

    She just heard Alice laughing on the other end.

    "I’m not the only one who can’t restrain myself!"

    Bette furrowed her brows, "What are you talking about?"

    Alice kept laughing, "She is a very interesting girl."

    "Al … tell me."

    "Well she tells me things about you two, and let’s just say, sometimes a girl just shouldn’t pick up the phone, you know?"

    "No. I don’t." Bette was only becoming more confused. "What the …"

    "Gotta go!" Alice giggled, "Bye Bette!"

    "Al-"

    Alice had already hung up. Bette looked at the phone in confusion, quickly vanishing the thought from her head. ‘She’s crazy. Just don’t pay attention to her,’ Bette told herself, ‘She’s probably just messing with you.’

    Bette spent some time picking out some clothes to go out in, while Tina finished up in the shower. When the water finally shut off, Bette turned to the door. She wasn’t sure what she was expecting to see, but she couldn’t seem to pull her eyes away.

    Tina opened the door with wet hair and only a towel covering her body. She looked up and saw the brunette staring at her.

    "Hey."

    Bette smiled, "Hey."

    Much to Bette’s surprise, Tina walked into her room, making her way over to her. "Bette?"

    "Yes?" She wanted to allow Tina the space to express herself.

    "I … just wanted to say that I will try to be better," she started, clutching the towel tightly in her hands, "I really don’t like watching you suffer. I just … get a sort of high from seeing how much I can affect you … your breathing …" Her eyes fixed on Bette’s lips.

    "It’s okay," Bette smiled, knowing that she really didn’t know what to do with all of these new feelings, and her conversation with Alice. "It’s alright."

    "I mean, it’s like I can’t even help it," Tina whispered, leaning in to kiss Bette gently on the lips before pulling away. "Even now … just seeing you … I found myself walking over to you. Sometimes I don’t even realize it."

    Bette smiled, "I’m really glad that you feel the same connection I do between us."

    "But I just feel really bad, I mean … you’re being so sweet waiting for me," Tina said, looking to the ground again.

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    1. I really hope that Tina will be ready soon. I don’t know how much longer Bette can hold out. Bette is being really sweet though, I love how she is so patient. =) PPS!!

    2. OMG! How is Bette surviving all this endless teasing??? I am so in awe of her patience. Tina will be absolutely kicking herself for waiting so long once she finally conquers her apprehension. I just want to say…the erotic dancing is going to kill me!!! AGGHHHH! Bring it on!!!

    6. I was just thinkin’….could you give me ample warning when you decide to post “the deed”? You know I’m going to end up on the floor and I’d rather get there and wait for it than fall. LMAO

    8. Good gracious alive, what is Tina doing to Bette. Both are going to melt into a puddle of butter with love as a topping. Maybe it is time to stretch a little further on Tina’s end of the deal.

    11. I’m glad that you have them taking their time. Tina still has a couple things to sort out. Soon it will fall into place, but no more advice from Alice. :) Thanks for posting!

    18. Oh man! I don’t know who’s getting tortured .. Bette or us :) Are you going to allow them and us to finally get some relief. Thank you for posting and glad you’re feeling better :)

    19. Wow..how do you make them so breathless,with so little effort?! It’s just keeps getting better and better..but phew!! Talk about some foreplay!! I don’t think poor Bette’s gonna make it!! And I don’t think she even really wants to at this point. Thank you my friend!!

    20. I am such a fan! I always feel a bit happier when I see you’ve updated… Inspire me to sit down and try to write something! Anyways greatbupdate as always… I wonder what tuna said to alice? Thanks for updating!

    22. i love ittttttttttttt. listrn i dont thing i ever been teased like ur doinh to us in my life. bette is amazing and tina is so sweet and innocent its so lovely how bette is keeping her safe. torture us a little bit more plssssss

    24. ok I am bette to crack first…these two are lovely but killing each other or at least one of them are…Alice is being Alice…so I wonder what holding Tina back..?? Then again maybe a twirl on the dance floor with her Bette will push her in the right direction..

    26. Tina’s more than ready, except Alice probabaly scared the crap outta her with her advice, and Tina knowing Bette’s past probably isn’t helping either, she’s just scared she won’t please her woman the way she knows she’s gonna be pleased! Wonder how torturous dinner is gonna be…and what’s really for dessert?? PPS:)

    29. Aweosme as always….and its so interesting, with the two stories…how different the characters are. I am impressed you don’t get confused…lol…but I like the progress of this story, and they are so super sweet together…thanks again Bi…xxx

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