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Tina, Chapter 13
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Okay, Ill be there in ten minutes. I hang up the phone and look at the others, Bette was taken to the emergency room this morning. They need me to come down there and give consent for something.
Oh my God, the words of concern flow from Danas mouth, is she okay?
I dont know, I inform her, they wont tell me anything over the phone. I notice my hands beginning to tremble. My head is beginning to spin.
Alice stands up and, wrapping her arms around me, guides me to the front door and down to her car. After the excruciating ten minute ride to the hospital, Alice drops me off in front of the emergency room doors and quickly finds a parking space.
I walk up to the glass doorsswooosshhh, they slide open allowing me safe passage. I enter the front room and approach what looks like a reception desk.
May I help you? The young woman behind the desk is surprisingly pleasant in the busy emergency room. She looks to be in her late twenties with dark brown hair.
Hi, I say, Im looking for Bette Porter. I was told shes a patient here. Alice and Dana walk up as I finish my statement.
Are you family, she asks.
Well, uhyeskind of. Im not sure how to respond. Are we still family?
Kind of? Her eyebrows are raised with the question. Shes asking for clarification.
Yes, I gather my composure and strength. Shes my wife.
Right, her response is slow and heartless.
Excuse me, Im beginning to grow agitated.
You have to be a blood relative or legally married to be considered family. Her emphasis on the word legally makes my blood boil. Im already upset that Bette may be hurt and thisthis ignorant little girl is telling me that were not LEGAL.
How dare you, I say the words through clenched teeth, feeling the fire in my eyes and voice.
Excuse me, another, older, woman interjects. Is there a problem here?
The receptionist is first to respond, this woman claims shes family of the Porter woman. The Porter woman? Her name is Bette you little *****.
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alright…perfection….this is wildtouch….and I am going to ask nicely………get your butt on your computer and post another chapter!!!!……lol…I forgot to say one thing………..please!!!!
That’s where you’re LEAVING us? I know you have the next (Tina) chapter already written or at least started… Arg, the agony! Surely, I jest, but you do have me holding on by a thread, so please post the next one posthaste. :)
dana’s foot moistening line is the most hilarious line i have read so far…ain’t it the truth?
I do not know why I have not read this series until today…I love the different perspectives…amazing journey…please continue soon, I’m on the edge of my seat…bravo perfection!!!
Perfection…this is perfection. This is so sad, but your writing is so vivid. I feel like I’m right there. Please continue…soon!
Your kidding me right?! I am moving house and won’t be able to get to see what happens until after the weekend AT LEAST. Please please please post soon so that I can be put out of my misery the next time I log on. (By the way it’s very well written I am really enjoying it in a strange kinda masochistic way!)
This sorta reminds me of something that was written by karebear, in may of o4. You cant leave us like this. Please dont do this. Tinas had enough heartache no more please.
it was nice meeting the brain beside this amazing story…just…don’t forget me…i mean, don’t forget to make things get better…please…your a really good writer…keep that cool!
Remember: you’re driving me crazy..but i adore that! kiss!