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To Live Without You (Chapter 13)
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"Whatever, I getting tired and I don’t think I’ll stay awake to be verbally abused." Shane and Alice gave a collective ‘awww’ as Dana stretched out across the back seat body and mind tired from the days events.
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"Yes Dana…I’m still in love with you…and I’ll still be in love with you, tomorrow and the day after that."
"Wait…I can’t do this…"
"Then let me watch you,"
Alice sat on the athlete’s lap and buried her left hand in Dana’s long dark hair pulling herself down into a passionate kiss. It began slow, the writer sucking leisurely on Dana’s tongue then pulling the athlete’s head back and devouring her neck. Dana moaned as Alice continued to kiss and bite her way down her chest stopping at the top of the athlete’s tank top. Dana took this as a sign,
"You want to stop," it wasn’t a question it was a statement that the athlete was sure of, but as Alice pushed her hands under Dana’s top the athlete’s certianity was quickly fading. The writer pulled off the athlete’s shirt replacing the fabric with her hands that firmly kneaded her breasts, Dana gasped leaning forward desperate to please the writer, but Alice held her still spreading her legs wider and pinning the athlete to the seat. Alice ground her hips into Dana settling next to her ear, the writer’s bottom lip brushing against it as she spoke,
"Dana, God you feel so good." Alice puncuated this by sliding down the athlete’s body down to her zipper, the writer slowly stripped Dana’s pants off leaving her panties on. Alice could smell Dana’s arousal as she took a nipple into her mouth flicking her tongue slowly as her fingers reached lower…
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"Oh God…" Dana moaned in the back seat as Shane and Alice looked at each other a little disgusted, it was obvious the athlete was having a sex dream the only problem was she the fact that she was sharing it with everyone in the vehicle. Alice eyes searched frantically for something to look at, focus on, take her any where but there, Shane only laughed lighting a cigarette and glancing back at Dana.
"Wow, Dana must really have some things going on up in that noggin of hers huh?" Alice stared out the window panicked, looking for a neutral answer,
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I was going to start calling you the daydreamer queen but Dana dreams of Alices in her sleep too, lol. You continue to make me crazy but I must admit, I like it! Not only do you make it hot… you make me laugh as well. The tension that you are building between the two is undeniable. Will the pill-popping athlete do something crazy… and I don’t mean dreaming. I see waivering on Alice’s part… with that reference to “that woman… Victoria” and things being “ok” with Cliff. She really can’t be all that happy. I like to see where you go with the Victoria/Gena connection… there has to be one? Looking forward to the Superbowl party, something tells me that you have something special planned for that. I love it as usual. I’m your captive fan… I won’t stray. Update soon (I’ll be on you too, no mental blocks allowed)lol
Read then all 1 thru what 12. every one cango back and read at anytime. I do that a lot. Love that Dana was dreaming of Alice and that Alice heard it. thanks
wow. great update. love that dream! how embarrassing. i really hope my friends would wake me if i was having that kind of dream! lol…
Yet another great update! I got all excited by just reading the summary and the first scene had me laughing out loud! OMG, I felt so embarassed for Dana!!!! (I had the same feeling watching that awkard sex scene between Dana and Jenny.) Good that Shane realizes that she made a HUGE mistake by erasing the message. :P Dana and Alice will have to talk (I hope it doesn’t gets you to depressed wirting that part ;) ) and maybe there is a little Shane intervention needed to get them back together? Looking forward to see Emily in the future, I agree with you, she has great interactions with both of them. :D
Another great update, loved the car ride home. There is such a strong connection there, I just they realize how special that is. Shane will do the right thing I hope! Post soon, thanks!
Great update! I loved Dana’s comment about Alice and Gabby. It was so random, and so Dana! lol The dream was painfully funny. I knew she was going to call out Alice’s name. Priceless. Alice needed time to heal after the breakup with Dana. She didn’t get over Dana, but she became functional. I’m still torn over Shane’s decision.
wow really loving this story :) erm please post soon and get alice and dana back together pleeeeeease, for me *puppy eyes* lolbye x
As always, you didnt’ disapoint. You have become one of my main Danish writer’s right now. I loved the car scene, and I’m glad she called out Alice’s name; it was hilarious. I think that Shane made the right decision, if Dana and Alice would’ve gotten together then it wouldn’t have been healthy for Alice; she needed time to find herself again. Aye, it wasn’t Shane’s decision to make for that, but it was the right one at that time, IMHO…Well, can’t wait for your next chap…(hope it’s longer) Cheers mate!!!
god this just gets better and better all the time and I can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon as for dana dream that was to cool love it