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To Live Without You (Chapter 13)
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"That feels amazing….please…don’t stop." And at the first touch of the writer’s tongue to Dana’s clit, the athlete was sure she couldn’t take much more, her breaths became ragged and the blonde could tell Dana was already close. The blonde sped her movements tasting the athlete, spinning her tongue while moving her hands slowly up Dana’s stomach.
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"Seriously Shane she’s getting out of hand back there," Shane tried not to laugh out loud, but it was becoming more difficult with every moan from the back seat. Dana became louder finally settling down and groaning slowly
"God Alice," Shane and Alice froze the writer’s eyes becoming wide and very similar to a deer in headlights, Shane tapped the brakes firmly sending Dana rolling off the back seat into the space between the seat and the floor. Alice cleared her throat, hoping to shake the embarrassment burning at her cheeks. Dana sat up groggily rubbing her forehead that had slammed on the floor,
"Dammit Shane….what the fuck?" Shane shrugged keeping her eyes on the road,
"Sorry, something in road." Alice tried to breath normally but it was becoming harder thinking about what Dana was dreaming about, frowning at her lapse in judgement.
‘Fuck Alice, get your shit together,’ The remainder of the car trip was spent in silence Alice in the front trying to devise a plan to keep herself in check, the athlete laying back on the seat, remembering her dream and smiling,
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By the time they’d gotten back into town they were all dead tired, Shane took Dana home first throwing the white Grand Prix into park she leaned back,
"The Planet tomorrow?…9:00?" Dana winced a little,
"I can’t I have physical therapy from nine until she’s done with me, I can do lunch though…I’ll call you?" Shane nodded as Dana stepped out of the car and toward her place, Alice followed motioning Shane to wait a second.
"Hey Dane?" The athlete turned around to look at the writer thinking she’d never seen someone so naturally beautiful, after the day they’d had the brunette was sure she looked like crap but Alice always looked amazing. Dana gave a small smile, she was frustrated with the writer but she couldn’t be mean to her.
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I was going to start calling you the daydreamer queen but Dana dreams of Alices in her sleep too, lol. You continue to make me crazy but I must admit, I like it! Not only do you make it hot… you make me laugh as well. The tension that you are building between the two is undeniable. Will the pill-popping athlete do something crazy… and I don’t mean dreaming. I see waivering on Alice’s part… with that reference to “that woman… Victoria” and things being “ok” with Cliff. She really can’t be all that happy. I like to see where you go with the Victoria/Gena connection… there has to be one? Looking forward to the Superbowl party, something tells me that you have something special planned for that. I love it as usual. I’m your captive fan… I won’t stray. Update soon (I’ll be on you too, no mental blocks allowed)lol
Read then all 1 thru what 12. every one cango back and read at anytime. I do that a lot. Love that Dana was dreaming of Alice and that Alice heard it. thanks
wow. great update. love that dream! how embarrassing. i really hope my friends would wake me if i was having that kind of dream! lol…
Yet another great update! I got all excited by just reading the summary and the first scene had me laughing out loud! OMG, I felt so embarassed for Dana!!!! (I had the same feeling watching that awkard sex scene between Dana and Jenny.) Good that Shane realizes that she made a HUGE mistake by erasing the message. :P Dana and Alice will have to talk (I hope it doesn’t gets you to depressed wirting that part ;) ) and maybe there is a little Shane intervention needed to get them back together? Looking forward to see Emily in the future, I agree with you, she has great interactions with both of them. :D
Another great update, loved the car ride home. There is such a strong connection there, I just they realize how special that is. Shane will do the right thing I hope! Post soon, thanks!
Great update! I loved Dana’s comment about Alice and Gabby. It was so random, and so Dana! lol The dream was painfully funny. I knew she was going to call out Alice’s name. Priceless. Alice needed time to heal after the breakup with Dana. She didn’t get over Dana, but she became functional. I’m still torn over Shane’s decision.
wow really loving this story :) erm please post soon and get alice and dana back together pleeeeeease, for me *puppy eyes* lolbye x
As always, you didnt’ disapoint. You have become one of my main Danish writer’s right now. I loved the car scene, and I’m glad she called out Alice’s name; it was hilarious. I think that Shane made the right decision, if Dana and Alice would’ve gotten together then it wouldn’t have been healthy for Alice; she needed time to find herself again. Aye, it wasn’t Shane’s decision to make for that, but it was the right one at that time, IMHO…Well, can’t wait for your next chap…(hope it’s longer) Cheers mate!!!
god this just gets better and better all the time and I can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon as for dana dream that was to cool love it