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To Live Without You (Chapter 13)
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"It would be a first." Shane chuckled taking a long drag off her cigarette, tapping her fingers on the steering wheel to the music,
"So what’s really going on Alice? Are you and Dana ok now or are we back to the awkward thing?" Alice stared off looking for the answer, things would never be perfectly comfortable when they weren’t together, but the writer couldn’t see how they could be together. Things were too complicated, especially now, with Cliff and that woman…Victoria.
Alice wasn’t sure but something was definitely going on there, she could see it in the double’s partners eyes, she saw it at the restaurant that night and at Dana’s last match. The writer shook her head trying to weigh everything and come to some sensible conclusion,
"I don’t know Shane, things are better that’s all I can say, I’m with Cliff and…everything is ok." but "ok" wasn’t enough for Alice, the writer realized. Dana began to turn in the back seat, her moans growing louder and more uncomfortable for Alice.
"Maybe we should…you know wake her up, she’s going to be really embarrassed." In reality the writer was embarrassed, feeling a bit guilty about leaving Dana the way she had in the car.
‘What were you supposed to do fuck her in the car? No that shit was just as much her fault as it was mine,’ Alice reasoned with herself as she turned to wake the athlete up. Shane grabbed her arm,
"Don’t, we’re almost home and we should let her have her fun…" Shane grinned, knowing Alice was growing uncomfortable.
"I’m joking Al…she’s just going to be mad embarrassed and if there’s no need I figure we can just forget. Right? I mean what if it was you?" The writer nodded realizing she’d want the same.
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"What are you doing to me?" Dana struggled to move her body so many different sensations attacking her at the same time, the athlete thought she would jump out of her own skin. Alice continued to move her lips lower, holding the athlete’s hips still against the back seat the writer slid her hands down Dana’s hips pulling off the athlete’s underwear in the process.
"I’m doing what you want me to Dana…I’m fucking you." The athlete moaned, she never thought she could have the writer like this again, it had been so long since she’d had Alice mouth on her skin she didn’t even realize how wonderful it really was. The way the writer moved her tongue in perfect sync with her hands, it did something to the brunette, and Dana let Alice know.
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I was going to start calling you the daydreamer queen but Dana dreams of Alices in her sleep too, lol. You continue to make me crazy but I must admit, I like it! Not only do you make it hot… you make me laugh as well. The tension that you are building between the two is undeniable. Will the pill-popping athlete do something crazy… and I don’t mean dreaming. I see waivering on Alice’s part… with that reference to “that woman… Victoria” and things being “ok” with Cliff. She really can’t be all that happy. I like to see where you go with the Victoria/Gena connection… there has to be one? Looking forward to the Superbowl party, something tells me that you have something special planned for that. I love it as usual. I’m your captive fan… I won’t stray. Update soon (I’ll be on you too, no mental blocks allowed)lol
Read then all 1 thru what 12. every one cango back and read at anytime. I do that a lot. Love that Dana was dreaming of Alice and that Alice heard it. thanks
wow. great update. love that dream! how embarrassing. i really hope my friends would wake me if i was having that kind of dream! lol…
Yet another great update! I got all excited by just reading the summary and the first scene had me laughing out loud! OMG, I felt so embarassed for Dana!!!! (I had the same feeling watching that awkard sex scene between Dana and Jenny.) Good that Shane realizes that she made a HUGE mistake by erasing the message. :P Dana and Alice will have to talk (I hope it doesn’t gets you to depressed wirting that part ;) ) and maybe there is a little Shane intervention needed to get them back together? Looking forward to see Emily in the future, I agree with you, she has great interactions with both of them. :D
Another great update, loved the car ride home. There is such a strong connection there, I just they realize how special that is. Shane will do the right thing I hope! Post soon, thanks!
Great update! I loved Dana’s comment about Alice and Gabby. It was so random, and so Dana! lol The dream was painfully funny. I knew she was going to call out Alice’s name. Priceless. Alice needed time to heal after the breakup with Dana. She didn’t get over Dana, but she became functional. I’m still torn over Shane’s decision.
wow really loving this story :) erm please post soon and get alice and dana back together pleeeeeease, for me *puppy eyes* lolbye x
As always, you didnt’ disapoint. You have become one of my main Danish writer’s right now. I loved the car scene, and I’m glad she called out Alice’s name; it was hilarious. I think that Shane made the right decision, if Dana and Alice would’ve gotten together then it wouldn’t have been healthy for Alice; she needed time to find herself again. Aye, it wasn’t Shane’s decision to make for that, but it was the right one at that time, IMHO…Well, can’t wait for your next chap…(hope it’s longer) Cheers mate!!!
god this just gets better and better all the time and I can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon as for dana dream that was to cool love it