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Too Late, Ch. 6
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“Please?” Dana begged, clasping her hands together. “I can’t do this right now. Please help me.”
Kit’s face softened as she looked down at Dana. “Oh, all right. But you owe me.”
“Whatever you want,” Dana promised.
“Oh, you don’t wanna say that,” Kit said, laughing.
“Okay, almost anything,” Dana amended, managing a grin. “And Kit, thank you.”
Kit hugged her. “Yeah, yeah. Hey, somebody’s gotta to help your skinny ***** out here, huh?”
“My ***** isn’t skinny,” Dana argued, and they both cracked up.
“What the ***** is going on?” Alice demanded as Kit came back into the waiting room. “My girl – my best friend is in there and I want to see her!”
“Calm down, Al,” Shane warned, catching Alice’s near slipup about what Dana was to her. Hmm.
“First of all, Alice, calm your hyper ***** down. You can see her tomorrow,” Kit began. She glanced around the nearly empty waiting room, glad for the privacy. Earlier, it had been crowded with reporters asking about Dana, but security had cleared them out. “Now, everybody might wanna sit down.”
“It’s something bad, isn’t it?” Alice asked, face pale.
“Just sit,” Kit scolded, watching everyone scramble for chairs. Lowering her voice, she said, “Okay, Dana asked me to tell you guys this for her. She found out a while ago and she told me, but made me promise not to tell anyone. Dana’s got breast cancer.”
Alice was out of her seat like a shot. “WHAT?”
Bette also leapt up. “You mean you knew and you didn’t tell us?”
Everyone’s voices rose as they expressed shock and dismay. Shane bit her lip to fight back tears and let herself fall into Carmen’s arms. Bette, Kit, and Alice were arguing loudly among one another, waking the sleeping Angelica, who lay nestled in her stroller beside Tina. Angelica began wailing while Tina desperately tried to soothe her, only adding to the commotion.
Shane had had enough. “Quiet!” she shouted. Everyone stared at her in surprise. “Look, if you want to argue, go do it some other ***** place. Dana’s sick, and she needs us to be there for us, not out here yelling at each other.”
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Two posts in one night! You’re great! I was embarrassed for Alice, then doubly so when Bette and Tina heard. At least Helena is out of the way so Alice and Dana will have a chance. Too bad for Helena.
This is getting tense, so when is the next chapter? *rubs hands in excitement* lol
Got to feel a bit sorry for Helene Every one needs someone. Helene just have bad luck finding that someone. Bette and Tina are so funny. Kit was there to stop the nonsence.. thanks
OMG…I can’t believe that I’m not gonna be here for an entire week…that means missing out an a ton of stories, especially yours!!! I loved the slip up when Alice almost called Dana her girlfriend…ooohh and when she yelled Dana’s name, I just about fell off my seat!! TiBette’s scenes were funny, especially Kit…btw love the way you’re having Dana confide in her. Can’t wait for the next….well I guess I have no choice
Ahhh awsome chapter, the love, anger, surprises, crazy day in vagas, i’ll say. Glad Helena’s out but ya still have to feel for her. i await your next post…
all I have to say is thank god you post fast. great job.
OMG!…WHY!?…aww I feel 4 Helena as I did Lara…Helena was her Britain beast..White knight galloping on a horse..I relli thought the British white knight would end up winning the gurl..Not the cancer patient..Aww Helena been burned during sex – OUCH…I hate po3ople being hurt&used 4 sik mind game pleasure..Poor Helena relli If you think bout It both Tina&Alice did use her…that is SO wrong..I relli thought this could be love?..I thought Helena saved her?…she’s happi..They should be happi 2gether!?…Urggg!. trajic…I was hoping Dane&Al could salvage their friendship..Not ruin Al’z current relationship…but Alas YOU the writer think not….BAD 4 Helena – GREAT 4 Dana though – no point In playing house when the real thing Is out they’re waiting?…I guess luv is jus tricky that way..xsumtimezx best friendz..1st luv..Soulmates – (Al&Dane) have a way of getting back 2gether..like B&T…I hate 2 admit It but Helena is Dana’z Lara..Alice&Dana may have loved Helena&Lara in some form but they were not IN luv with them…cuz they r IN love with each other…least Helena realized this bit of vital information bout their relationship before she got her heart deeply involved..Intertwined&ripped? – (2 late? – I think so…hopefully Helena&Lara a.k.a. ‘Dana’s chef’ can rely on Alice’s handy dandy chart&find luv?..Maybe 2gether?).. I hope Alice&the British dyke can least salvage their previous friendship?… Interesting how things play out..I love your writing..your stry..I hope Dana&life gets better 4 the L-word gurls…THNK u 4 writing his piece of wrk, dun stop..mst Post so0N..
It keeps getting better, like it’s even possible. Ohhhhhh let Alice and Dana finally meet!!! Thanks for posting so soon, we’re waiting =)
i never thought i could one day say something like that but i really like Helena and she deserve be happy..now Dana and Alice have to talk and try o help each other to rebuild their life i hope dana will be healthy soon…and B&T..so funny..please show more of them..great chapter post soon thanks
what will happen at the hospital tomorrow when they all go to see dana and what will hapens beween alice and helena but I can’t wait to see what happens beween alice and dana please post soon I love it