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Too Late, Ch. 6
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Alice had demanded they leave the hotel immediately and head home, but Helena had refused, trying to calm her down. Alice was more hurt than mad. It bothered her that, despite their breakup, Dana had felt she had to keep something so important from her. Alice had wanted to go back to being best friends, but that had proved to be more difficult than it sounded. But then Alice had found Helena, and found she could feel a margin of that same happiness again. While she wasn’t exactly in love with Helena, the woman was fun, intelligent, and generous, which had taken Alice by surprise. Helena was different from the way Bette made her out to be: in all honesty, Helena was no different from any of them – she had been burned before and was just looking for someone to love her. That was all Alice had wanted as well. It had been hard to get over Dana, but Alice thought she had been succeeding well – until this little roadblock.
Now, Alice was lying beneath Helena on the bed, hands gripping the sheets tightly as Helena’s wicked tongue manipulated Alice’s *****. Pinching her own nipple with one hand, Alice let her other hand trail down to play in Helena’s dark hair, pushing her face harder into her center.
Helena slipped one hand up to tease Alice’s erect nipple, while the other hand began a deliciously slow, torturous ***** with its fingers. Alice moaned and pushed her body upwards, feeling her ***** fast approach. “God!” she shouted as Helena’s tongue danced over her engorged *****.
Helena flicked her ***** with her tongue, bringing her to the edge. Alice let out another drawn-out moan as she came, and said with a gasp, “Oh, Dana, yes!”
Alice lay there in a state of post-orgasmic bliss, not noticing that Helena had stood up and was glaring at her. “What?”
“You just called me Dana,” Helena accused.
“No I didn’t.” Alice tried to deny it. Did I really call her Dana? *****.
“Yes, you did,” Helena argued.
“Well, I just, uh, have her on my mind, considering today’s events and all,” Alice stammered, pulling the sheets up around her.
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Two posts in one night! You’re great! I was embarrassed for Alice, then doubly so when Bette and Tina heard. At least Helena is out of the way so Alice and Dana will have a chance. Too bad for Helena.
This is getting tense, so when is the next chapter? *rubs hands in excitement* lol
Got to feel a bit sorry for Helene Every one needs someone. Helene just have bad luck finding that someone. Bette and Tina are so funny. Kit was there to stop the nonsence.. thanks
OMG…I can’t believe that I’m not gonna be here for an entire week…that means missing out an a ton of stories, especially yours!!! I loved the slip up when Alice almost called Dana her girlfriend…ooohh and when she yelled Dana’s name, I just about fell off my seat!! TiBette’s scenes were funny, especially Kit…btw love the way you’re having Dana confide in her. Can’t wait for the next….well I guess I have no choice
Ahhh awsome chapter, the love, anger, surprises, crazy day in vagas, i’ll say. Glad Helena’s out but ya still have to feel for her. i await your next post…
all I have to say is thank god you post fast. great job.
OMG!…WHY!?…aww I feel 4 Helena as I did Lara…Helena was her Britain beast..White knight galloping on a horse..I relli thought the British white knight would end up winning the gurl..Not the cancer patient..Aww Helena been burned during sex – OUCH…I hate po3ople being hurt&used 4 sik mind game pleasure..Poor Helena relli If you think bout It both Tina&Alice did use her…that is SO wrong..I relli thought this could be love?..I thought Helena saved her?…she’s happi..They should be happi 2gether!?…Urggg!. trajic…I was hoping Dane&Al could salvage their friendship..Not ruin Al’z current relationship…but Alas YOU the writer think not….BAD 4 Helena – GREAT 4 Dana though – no point In playing house when the real thing Is out they’re waiting?…I guess luv is jus tricky that way..xsumtimezx best friendz..1st luv..Soulmates – (Al&Dane) have a way of getting back 2gether..like B&T…I hate 2 admit It but Helena is Dana’z Lara..Alice&Dana may have loved Helena&Lara in some form but they were not IN luv with them…cuz they r IN love with each other…least Helena realized this bit of vital information bout their relationship before she got her heart deeply involved..Intertwined&ripped? – (2 late? – I think so…hopefully Helena&Lara a.k.a. ‘Dana’s chef’ can rely on Alice’s handy dandy chart&find luv?..Maybe 2gether?).. I hope Alice&the British dyke can least salvage their previous friendship?… Interesting how things play out..I love your writing..your stry..I hope Dana&life gets better 4 the L-word gurls…THNK u 4 writing his piece of wrk, dun stop..mst Post so0N..
It keeps getting better, like it’s even possible. Ohhhhhh let Alice and Dana finally meet!!! Thanks for posting so soon, we’re waiting =)
i never thought i could one day say something like that but i really like Helena and she deserve be happy..now Dana and Alice have to talk and try o help each other to rebuild their life i hope dana will be healthy soon…and B&T..so funny..please show more of them..great chapter post soon thanks
what will happen at the hospital tomorrow when they all go to see dana and what will hapens beween alice and helena but I can’t wait to see what happens beween alice and dana please post soon I love it