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Too Late, Ch. 6
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“She didn’t need us to be there for her before,” Alice argued bitterly, teeth clenched. Helena tried to put an arm around her, but Alice jerked away angrily.
“Look, everyone just calm down. Let’s get back to the hotel and get some rest. We can all see her tomorrow,” Kit said.
Alice laughed harshly. “You mean all of you can go see her. I have nothing to say to her.” Hurt and angry, she turned and stalked out.
Carmen awoke in the middle of the night to find Shane missing from the bed. Slightly worried, she got up and slipped her clothes back on and grabbed her room key, heading downstairs to the casino area.
She found Shane in front of a slot machine, mindlessly feeding the machine nickels and pulling down on the lever, staring off into the distance, an unlit cigarette dangling from her lip. “Hey, babe,” she whispered into Shane’s ear, feeling her jump beneath her.
The cigarette fell from Shane’s lips, and she caught it before it hit the floor. “Hey, Carm. I just had to, you know, clear my head. I was just thinking.”
Carmen plopped down beside her. “You know, this is my first time in Vegas.”
Shane smiled wryly, lifting the lighter up and lighting her cigarette. “I wish your first time was under better circumstances,” she remarked, blowing out a plume of smoke away from Carmen.
“Maybe we’ll come back again one day,” Carmen said absently. She leaned closer to Shane, slipping a nickel into the machine and pulling down the lever. “Are you mad at Dana?”
Shane shook her head and took another long drag on her cigarette. “No. I wish she’d told us, but I can understand why she’d want to keep it to herself. She had her reasons for doing it, and I respect those reasons, whatever they are.”
“Alice is pretty upset,” Carmen noted, trying to balance a coin on the edge of the machine.
“She needs to lay off Dana a little. Those two have too much of a past together to fall apart like this,” Shane answered, stubbing her cigarette out into the ashtray beside her. “I swear, I think they both need a good swift kick in the *****.”
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Two posts in one night! You’re great! I was embarrassed for Alice, then doubly so when Bette and Tina heard. At least Helena is out of the way so Alice and Dana will have a chance. Too bad for Helena.
This is getting tense, so when is the next chapter? *rubs hands in excitement* lol
Got to feel a bit sorry for Helene Every one needs someone. Helene just have bad luck finding that someone. Bette and Tina are so funny. Kit was there to stop the nonsence.. thanks
OMG…I can’t believe that I’m not gonna be here for an entire week…that means missing out an a ton of stories, especially yours!!! I loved the slip up when Alice almost called Dana her girlfriend…ooohh and when she yelled Dana’s name, I just about fell off my seat!! TiBette’s scenes were funny, especially Kit…btw love the way you’re having Dana confide in her. Can’t wait for the next….well I guess I have no choice
Ahhh awsome chapter, the love, anger, surprises, crazy day in vagas, i’ll say. Glad Helena’s out but ya still have to feel for her. i await your next post…
all I have to say is thank god you post fast. great job.
OMG!…WHY!?…aww I feel 4 Helena as I did Lara…Helena was her Britain beast..White knight galloping on a horse..I relli thought the British white knight would end up winning the gurl..Not the cancer patient..Aww Helena been burned during sex – OUCH…I hate po3ople being hurt&used 4 sik mind game pleasure..Poor Helena relli If you think bout It both Tina&Alice did use her…that is SO wrong..I relli thought this could be love?..I thought Helena saved her?…she’s happi..They should be happi 2gether!?…Urggg!. trajic…I was hoping Dane&Al could salvage their friendship..Not ruin Al’z current relationship…but Alas YOU the writer think not….BAD 4 Helena – GREAT 4 Dana though – no point In playing house when the real thing Is out they’re waiting?…I guess luv is jus tricky that way..xsumtimezx best friendz..1st luv..Soulmates – (Al&Dane) have a way of getting back 2gether..like B&T…I hate 2 admit It but Helena is Dana’z Lara..Alice&Dana may have loved Helena&Lara in some form but they were not IN luv with them…cuz they r IN love with each other…least Helena realized this bit of vital information bout their relationship before she got her heart deeply involved..Intertwined&ripped? – (2 late? – I think so…hopefully Helena&Lara a.k.a. ‘Dana’s chef’ can rely on Alice’s handy dandy chart&find luv?..Maybe 2gether?).. I hope Alice&the British dyke can least salvage their previous friendship?… Interesting how things play out..I love your writing..your stry..I hope Dana&life gets better 4 the L-word gurls…THNK u 4 writing his piece of wrk, dun stop..mst Post so0N..
It keeps getting better, like it’s even possible. Ohhhhhh let Alice and Dana finally meet!!! Thanks for posting so soon, we’re waiting =)
i never thought i could one day say something like that but i really like Helena and she deserve be happy..now Dana and Alice have to talk and try o help each other to rebuild their life i hope dana will be healthy soon…and B&T..so funny..please show more of them..great chapter post soon thanks
what will happen at the hospital tomorrow when they all go to see dana and what will hapens beween alice and helena but I can’t wait to see what happens beween alice and dana please post soon I love it