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    Trouble in designer suits Ch.8

    Story written on September 25, 2005 by Ellie R.
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    the girls finish their tale and tina sees hope for them in her family.

    Loved for eternity though only on earth for a moment.

     

    We had chosen names a few weeks before and I honoured our choices as I laid them to rest our daughters Faith and Mia.

     

    ——–Peggy———

     

    It was the most moving service and I cried more than I thought I ever would. Andy stood apart. She looked beautiful in her private agony a statuesque figure in a black suit she laid a rose in the grave of each of her daughters before standing and waiting for the others to leave. Once those who had came departed I slowly approached her.

     

    I reached her just in time as she succumbed to the pain and anguish and collapsed into the most heart wrenching sobs I had ever heard. She fell to her knee’s taking me with her sobbing and begging for Rachel to come back to her. I think it is the only time she ever let out the pain she experienced and was glad she had someone to hold her as it over came her whole being.

     

    ——-Rachel——

     

    It was the beeping of the machines that bought me back to the world I had been avoiding for so long. An insistent noise in my peace that forced me to open my eyes.

    It took a while for my vision to clear but when it did she was the first thing I saw. She was dressed in black and had muddy marks on her knee’s she looked drawn and pained even in her sleeping state. She had noticeably lost weight and her skin was sallow but I was so happy to see her I didn’t really take in what all these changes could mean.

     

    I could not speak for the tube down my throat would not allow it. I managed to reach a call button and a nurse appeared immediately. The noises woke my sleeping wife and as she looked at me the lifelessness in her once soulful, deep expressive eyes told me all I needed to know.

     

    As she and the doctors tried to explain my tears flowed freely and I wondered if I would ever be able to stop. The guilt of what I had let happen and the price I had paid settled on my shoulders then and I wondered if the weight would ever get any lighter.

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    1. Beautiful I have tears in my eyes again and I only hope that they can all help rachel and andy to find happiness once again please post soon I love this so much but it does break my heart to read all of the pain that they had to go though

    2. oh ellie this is breathtaking. i really look forward to read more because in this story there are just so many interesting issues waiting for solutions. thanks again.

    4. Damn that was beautiful and amazing, so sad and so sorry for them. Glad they meet Bette and Tina and Peggy Peabody and the gang and they will help them to go throught this pain. Ok post soon please, thanks!

    5. I was never able to understand the sense of loss that engulfs you when you lose someone you love so very much. I’m lucky I suppose to have never experienced that, but reading the FanFic that’s here – especially the Tina and Bette storyline, has helped me to understand it more. When I read stories of how they miss their child/children even if they’re away from them for a brief time I find myself wanting to go and see my god-daughter and just spend time with her and fall in love with her over and over again as she starts to discover the world as only a baby can. When I read this story it breaks my heart because even though I don’t have kids myself I can understand what it would be to lose one, let alone to lose one the awful way Rachel and Andy did. I guess what I’m saying is that even though this hurts to read and I’m as close to tears as I can probably get, thank you. Thank you for writing this and thank you for helping me to understand it.

    6. It still amazes me that seemingly out of nowhere a story of such detail, love, strugle can be born. I wish that I had the ability to form words like this, to have a though and make it into some giant tale. Simply amazing that you have this ability to tell a story and it be to captivating, I’m totally at your mercy…post soon pls

    7. I absolutely love this story. Those tw young ladies are really hurting and who if not this group can get them back together with all the love they share. Love it. Post soon, please.

    8. OMG….this was simply beautiful; especially this part – Fate hade bought them into our lives and we had let them into our hearts. Now we would help them let the world back into theirs.

      I absolutely love it.

    11. Beautiful, just beautiful. I lvoe this story, Somehow I have missed this story, sorry about that, and I started to read it last night, and I love it. Let Andy and Rachel be good again, they deserve it, they’ve been through so much. Please post again really soon ;)

    12. That was so sad and yet so beautiful, Bette and Tina are such understanding and the gang they are there through thick and thin. Andy and Racheal are very lucky to have found them. Peggy Peabody also. What did Helene do guess I missed that part. thanks

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