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    Trouble in designer suits Ch.8

    Story written on September 25, 2005 by Ellie R.
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    the girls finish their tale and tina sees hope for them in her family.

     

    Then after what seemed like an eternity the doctor came to tell us that Rachel was out of surgery and had been taken up to intensive care.

    ——-Andy——

     

    I couldn’t express it but the overwhelming joy I felt that she had survived nearly caused me to pass out again. I truly think it would have ended me had she been lost that night also. I had given a piece of myself to each of my daughters as they went on to a place more worthy of them and I knew my soul would have gone with her had she decided to follow them. So when I was told she was hanging on I felt my heart struggle to do the same thing.

     

    The doctor took us up to see her. She had severe bruising over her face but apparently had not broken any bones there and would return to normal in time. It was the damage further down that would cause us further heartache. He had stabbed and beaten her body as though she was the cause of all the wrong in the world. Four stab wounds three to the chest and one to the abdomen. The chest wounds had been deep but had been repaired so that so long as she regained consciousness there would be no lasting damage. The trauma to her abdomen had been more sever. It was a miracle that our daughters had been saved in time to live even for the short time they did. Rachel’s womb was not so fortunate and they had to remove it along with her ovaries and any chance she would have to feel life inside of her again.

     

    That month I barley left her side Peggy bought me all I needed and stayed with me as much as she could. Sometime in there I had to decide what was to become of the bodies of our daughters. I waited as long as they would let me but in the end they were cremated and their ashes buried in a beautiful service in a quiet private cemetery that Peggy had helped me to find the headstones identical in beautiful white marble apart from the names. They read

     

    Here liesBeloved daughter of Rachel and Andrea.

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    1. Beautiful I have tears in my eyes again and I only hope that they can all help rachel and andy to find happiness once again please post soon I love this so much but it does break my heart to read all of the pain that they had to go though

    2. oh ellie this is breathtaking. i really look forward to read more because in this story there are just so many interesting issues waiting for solutions. thanks again.

    4. Damn that was beautiful and amazing, so sad and so sorry for them. Glad they meet Bette and Tina and Peggy Peabody and the gang and they will help them to go throught this pain. Ok post soon please, thanks!

    5. I was never able to understand the sense of loss that engulfs you when you lose someone you love so very much. I’m lucky I suppose to have never experienced that, but reading the FanFic that’s here – especially the Tina and Bette storyline, has helped me to understand it more. When I read stories of how they miss their child/children even if they’re away from them for a brief time I find myself wanting to go and see my god-daughter and just spend time with her and fall in love with her over and over again as she starts to discover the world as only a baby can. When I read this story it breaks my heart because even though I don’t have kids myself I can understand what it would be to lose one, let alone to lose one the awful way Rachel and Andy did. I guess what I’m saying is that even though this hurts to read and I’m as close to tears as I can probably get, thank you. Thank you for writing this and thank you for helping me to understand it.

    6. It still amazes me that seemingly out of nowhere a story of such detail, love, strugle can be born. I wish that I had the ability to form words like this, to have a though and make it into some giant tale. Simply amazing that you have this ability to tell a story and it be to captivating, I’m totally at your mercy…post soon pls

    7. I absolutely love this story. Those tw young ladies are really hurting and who if not this group can get them back together with all the love they share. Love it. Post soon, please.

    8. OMG….this was simply beautiful; especially this part – Fate hade bought them into our lives and we had let them into our hearts. Now we would help them let the world back into theirs.

      I absolutely love it.

    11. Beautiful, just beautiful. I lvoe this story, Somehow I have missed this story, sorry about that, and I started to read it last night, and I love it. Let Andy and Rachel be good again, they deserve it, they’ve been through so much. Please post again really soon ;)

    12. That was so sad and yet so beautiful, Bette and Tina are such understanding and the gang they are there through thick and thin. Andy and Racheal are very lucky to have found them. Peggy Peabody also. What did Helene do guess I missed that part. thanks

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