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    Trouble in designer suits Ch.9

    Previously:

     

    Bette & Tina’s Wednesday morning.

     

    ———Tina——-

     

    I could not believe that these women had survived to be sitting here at all. But here they were trying to fight to rebuild a life that was so heinously taken from them. I could feel the tears I had cried first from laughter then from sadness at their story and could see that there was only one person that had not broken. Andy just looked distant until Peggy spoke to her.

     

    “Andy look at you, you hold all this in and it’s more than even I knew about. But you need to let it go let us in. Let us help you to be a human again. To show emotion is human but somehow along the way I think you started to perceive it as week.”

     

    Then she cried, she sobbed and she apologised to her wife and us her new friend. To Peggy for standing by them and then to her daughters for almost ruining what they had left behind and for not being there when they had most needed her.

     

    Then she let her wife carry her to the spare room and fell into a sound deep sleep.  And she looked peaceful at least for a while the pain had left her beautiful face.

     

    As Rachel came back out to us there was a knock at the front door it was now eleven in the morning we had all lost track of time. There at the door stood our friends. Worried about our late night activities they had brought us breakfast. Alice had a strap across her swollen nose but still grinned when the other told Bette and I what had happened. We sent the kid’s out to the pool whilst we went to the kitchen. They were all there Sane and Carmen, Alice and Dana, Mark and Hannah (his Wife) and of course Jenny and Kit. Peggy, Rachel and I gave them a very abbreviated version of what we had heard the night before and explained that Andy was sleeping.

     

    I looked around at the impromptu gathering and felt a glow inside. If the people in this room could not help mend these two women then I would hold my hands up but my heart told me that we could help and I was starting to form plans to do so as the others sat and laughed as they retold the story of Alice’s nose again and Rachel slipped of to sit with her wife.

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    Comments

    1. Please continue. Your writing is spectacular and your plot is even more sensational. You have really drawn me into caring about about Rach & Andy. Brava!

    2. I dont think the will be kicking and screaming to stay in that family. Once you are in your are in, Doesnt cost.just a lot of love for everyone and be there to help each other,,,thanks

    3. Do we want you to carry on. NO, absolutly not, worst story we ever read. HELLO, are you paying attention. Since the begining this story has, had us riveted to our seats, waiting to see what had happened, waiting to see if it could be fixed. My God, two separate couples, yet not really, their lives so similar yet not. Who better to understand than Bette and Tina, and what better group of people could you have around you to pick you up when your so down than the gang. Of course continue, we’ve got to see Andy return, how things work out, etc. etc.

    4. hey ellie being such a tease! of course we want you to go on. i still find your story amazing because you describe so well all the thoughts of your characters. thanks.

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