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Trouble in designer suits Ch.9
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There was still a long way for the two of them but they wanted to get there and I shared that hope that Andy had felt as She travelled over here. Fate hade bought them into our lives and we had let them into our hearts. Now we would help them let the world back into theirs.
———-Bette———
We all headed out to the pool so as not to wake Andy. I sat and watched as the children played comfortable in each other’s company. There were of course our two girls, then Shane and Carmen’s twin boys Dylan and Trey who were now eight. And last but by no means least Dana and Alice’s two the older a boy Christian who is ten and the younger a girl Beccie who is eight like the twins.
I was curious as Rachel watched them now I knew what I did but instead of upsetting her they seemed to make her smile and I was glad to see it after the hard night she had been through and the events that had lead her to be here in the first place.
We were not out there long before Angie spotted us and she soon made her way over to Rachel. She stood next to her without speaking for a moment and then just held her hand and said
“I saw the picture on the table your babies they were really pretty.”
The silence was deafening as everyone waited to see what Rachel’s response would be. All of us had been trying so hard to keep the mood light and not talk about it, I think we were all curios as to how she would react.
“Yes they were. I wish that you could have met them. But they are in a better place and I live each day because I know I will meet them again and I want them to be proud of me when I do.”
I saw Tina move over and place a hand on her shoulder as she passed her a mug of coffee and saw the grateful look she shot her. I saw how this amazing woman had found a way to carry on saw why she wasn’t a complete wreck as I was sure I would be. But Tina seemed to understand and stayed close to her in a companiable silence as we continued to watch the children in the pool.
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Yes, please carry on. There is more of this story for you to tell us.
well ….yeah… we want you to continue.. this is a good story… i do have a question…why doesn’t andy get pregnant… please continue
Please continue. Your writing is spectacular and your plot is even more sensational. You have really drawn me into caring about about Rach & Andy. Brava!
I dont think the will be kicking and screaming to stay in that family. Once you are in your are in, Doesnt cost.just a lot of love for everyone and be there to help each other,,,thanks
“TBC???? Do you want me to carry on”–What kind of question is that??? Of course you MUST continue!!!
Hell yes!..just gets better&better..Post so0n..
Well maybe another 20-30 chapters may satisfy us for awhile…but you know us…we’ll always want more…post soon you’ve def got my attention!!!
Why is it that when a story is riveting, you authors ask some shit like this: TBC???? Do you want me to carry on.
Like damn….are we going to say NO?
please do
Of couse we really want to se carry on please. This is good and can’t wait to see Andy and Rachel get back to a happy life again. Post soon, thanks!
Do we want you to carry on. NO, absolutly not, worst story we ever read. HELLO, are you paying attention. Since the begining this story has, had us riveted to our seats, waiting to see what had happened, waiting to see if it could be fixed. My God, two separate couples, yet not really, their lives so similar yet not. Who better to understand than Bette and Tina, and what better group of people could you have around you to pick you up when your so down than the gang. Of course continue, we’ve got to see Andy return, how things work out, etc. etc.
yeah someone is smoking a little to much crack and asking stupid questions.
so I’ll be looking for your next chapter hopefully soon!!!
hey ellie being such a tease! of course we want you to go on. i still find your story amazing because you describe so well all the thoughts of your characters. thanks.
yes plaese carry on i love this story and would love to see them back together in the end of all of this there is so much work to be done please post soon