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Trouble in designer suits Ch.9
At lunchtime we were all still in the yard everyone had missed work and seemed to be enjoying themselves then Rachel went to check on Andy who was still out of it and left with Angie to have lunch and continue her tour of the city through the eyes of a fifteen year old.
Then I went into the spare room to check on our sleeping guest. When I opened the door I found Katie sat on the chair reading a book. She had taken the picture from the table and stood it next to the bed. She looked up as I came in and motioned for me to be quiet. I was struck again by how like Tina she was. How I would ever survive if anything were to happen to her or Angie I do not know. I entered the room and Katie stood so I could sit the she sat back on my lap she pointed to the place on her page and I read over her shoulder.
“What are you two doing in here when it’s such a lovely day outside?”
Her voice shocked me I had been so engrossed in the silly children’s book I had been reading without really knowing it. I had not expected her to wake it was only 2:00pm which meant that she had only been asleep for three hours I felt that if it were me I would have slept for ever.
“How do you feel can I get you anything? The others are all outside so you can join us if you feel ready.”
She was eager to see the others and meet those that she had not yet seen. But first she asked to borrow some clothes. I leant her some yoga pants and a vest with a bikini in case she wanted to swim and left her to change.
She came out a few minutes later and the others immediately pulled her into the group, she really had no choice they would make her feel part of our family if it killed them.
She blushed a little when she heard what had happened to Alice’s nose and tried to head back inside but I caught her and leant in so only she could hear me.
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Yes, please carry on. There is more of this story for you to tell us.
well ….yeah… we want you to continue.. this is a good story… i do have a question…why doesn’t andy get pregnant… please continue
Please continue. Your writing is spectacular and your plot is even more sensational. You have really drawn me into caring about about Rach & Andy. Brava!
I dont think the will be kicking and screaming to stay in that family. Once you are in your are in, Doesnt cost.just a lot of love for everyone and be there to help each other,,,thanks
“TBC???? Do you want me to carry on”–What kind of question is that??? Of course you MUST continue!!!
Hell yes!..just gets better&better..Post so0n..
Well maybe another 20-30 chapters may satisfy us for awhile…but you know us…we’ll always want more…post soon you’ve def got my attention!!!
Why is it that when a story is riveting, you authors ask some shit like this: TBC???? Do you want me to carry on.
Like damn….are we going to say NO?
please do
Of couse we really want to se carry on please. This is good and can’t wait to see Andy and Rachel get back to a happy life again. Post soon, thanks!
Do we want you to carry on. NO, absolutly not, worst story we ever read. HELLO, are you paying attention. Since the begining this story has, had us riveted to our seats, waiting to see what had happened, waiting to see if it could be fixed. My God, two separate couples, yet not really, their lives so similar yet not. Who better to understand than Bette and Tina, and what better group of people could you have around you to pick you up when your so down than the gang. Of course continue, we’ve got to see Andy return, how things work out, etc. etc.
yeah someone is smoking a little to much crack and asking stupid questions.
so I’ll be looking for your next chapter hopefully soon!!!
hey ellie being such a tease! of course we want you to go on. i still find your story amazing because you describe so well all the thoughts of your characters. thanks.
yes plaese carry on i love this story and would love to see them back together in the end of all of this there is so much work to be done please post soon