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    Trouble in designer suits Ch.9

    Story written on September 25, 2005 by Ellie R.
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    the begining of the journey back.

     

    ———Rachel——

     

    I had a good lunch with Angie and she did not ask any more about my past but made me laugh and took me to a park that she liked and shared her world with me. I realised that I was letting her in and it was frightening but it felt good to know that I could still do so. This young girl so full of life and passion was breaking into my heart and I was powerless to stop it.

     

    I retuned to the house earlier than the previous day I wanted to make sure that Andy was ok, I hoped that she would still be sleeping but held little hope. As I made my way through the house the sound I heard made me stop in my tracks. It was unmistakably her laughter it had been a sound I fell in love with the first time I heard it and my heart had missed it in it’s absence. My sudden halt startled Angie and she went to speak, I signalled her to stay quiet and just listened until the sound stopped.

     

    I was shocked into a halt again as I reached the pool and saw my wife in a tight embrace with Peggy. She never touched people anymore. We only made physical contact if we had *****, the rest of the time she kept a safe distance from everyone. The sight made my heart leap, she had finally turned around. She was still along way away but she was headed back towards the world and I hoped back to me.

     

    I walked over and greeted her. It seemed very formal as I asked how she was and if she had slept well. But we spoke she didn’t cut me off or leave, she didn’t use the fewest amount of words to answer my questions. What we did was have a conversation that was just a conversation no undertones or bitterness just words that passed between us and meant only what they said.

     

     

    ———-Kit———-

     

    As the two women engaged in a rather formal greeting I collared Tina and Bette and got a fuller version of the last nights events. The story was heartbreaking and I was glad that we had pushed them together last night. Watching them from across the pool I could see they were both unsure but that with some help from the friends they had here they were talking and that was a big step from what I could tell. I was proud of Bette for going through this she had grown beyond anything I could have imagined and now had the faith in herself and Tina, in her family to be able to help without doubting herself.

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    3. Please continue. Your writing is spectacular and your plot is even more sensational. You have really drawn me into caring about about Rach & Andy. Brava!

    4. I dont think the will be kicking and screaming to stay in that family. Once you are in your are in, Doesnt cost.just a lot of love for everyone and be there to help each other,,,thanks

    11. Do we want you to carry on. NO, absolutly not, worst story we ever read. HELLO, are you paying attention. Since the begining this story has, had us riveted to our seats, waiting to see what had happened, waiting to see if it could be fixed. My God, two separate couples, yet not really, their lives so similar yet not. Who better to understand than Bette and Tina, and what better group of people could you have around you to pick you up when your so down than the gang. Of course continue, we’ve got to see Andy return, how things work out, etc. etc.

    13. hey ellie being such a tease! of course we want you to go on. i still find your story amazing because you describe so well all the thoughts of your characters. thanks.

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