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    True love – Chapter 24

    Story written on March 1, 2008 by landon.
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    Fear, rivalry and love

    Shane’s POV

     

    Today was the day. The day I feared. The day I never wanted to come. The day I might die. Okay, now I’m exaggerating. It’s 7 a.m now and I’m already awake with my eyes wide open. On a normal day at this time I would have been asleep like a baby. But as I already mentioned today was not a normal day.

    I turn to the left side to see Carmen sleeping peacefully. Although she’s wearing a t-shirt in which she fits in thrice and she snores like a little dog I had to smile happily. I bend forward to reach her forehead which I kissed tenderly.

     

     

    “I bet you don’t even realize how much I love you…Well that’s not your fault. You can’t even mesure it. But if I had to tell you how much I love you in miles I guess you can say that I love you from where we are to the moon and back…That’s how much I love you…”

     

     

    I turned back staring at the ceiling thinking about what I should tell Carmen’s mom.

     

     

    “Hi Miss Morales. I know I behaved like an ass…no gosh, I can’t say that… I know my behaviour was inacceptable, but I love your daughter… I promise you…no…damn it, I am so dead.”

     

     

    I got out of the bed and prepared breakfast before I took a shower. With a towel wrapped around my waist I got into the room to choose some clothes.

     

     

    Carmen: “Good morning, baby.”

     

    Shane: “Morning…how did you sleep?”

     

    Carmen: “Good, how about you?”

     

    Shane: “Well, to be honest. I may have slept 2 hours.”

     

    Carmen: “Because of the lunch at my mom’s?”

     

     

    I just looked at her nodding. She grabbed my waist and pulled me onto her not caring that the towel fell on the ground.

    She kissed me softly whispering into my ear.

     

     

    Carmen: “I love you, Shane. You know that, right?”

     

    Shane: “Yeah.”

     

    Carmen: “And you love me, right?”

     

    Shane: “I do…”

     

     

    I grinned at her and kissed her back this time.

     

     

    Carmen: “That’s all that matters, you know? What you did to me was wrong and of course my mom is mad at you, but she will see that we love each other and that you make me happy, no matter what happened in the past. She will accept it.”

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    1. babez im lovin’ dis to da fullest :p But hey dat wuz a cheap, messed up move on both Mercedes and Papi . . . I’m glad dat my gurlz Shane and Carmen are able to talk more freely now than b/4 . . . Whelp, I hope u iz plannin on gracin us with anotha update like today, lol ~puppy-pout~ Like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;p . . . Stank, da’ one and only, chicka ;D Holla’ at me sumthimez!!

    3. this was a great update! mercedes better be careful because she will lose carmen if she continues to take this route…loved how shane reassured carmen…cant wait for the next chapter

    4. great post! And papi’s attitude always make me laugh.. which leads me to ask, does anyone know why papi isn’t in season 5? It bummes me out..argh!^^ Aaanyways.. PPS!!=)

    5. wow, this chap broke my heart…! honestly its one of my favourites. I loved every word! From the hot and cute beginning to the unbelievably sweet ending. I really really liked the last scene in the car….carmen climbing on shane’s lap and shane being soooo reassuring, it was sooooo good.On the other hand i cant believe Mercedes was trying to hook carmen up witj Papi!!!!!!!!!I didnt expect that from her, i mean sure she is angry with shane and it might take forever to fully trust her put hooking carmen with papi in from of shane is too much.anyway, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok???? i cant wait for so long again!!!!!!

    8. Mecedes has a habit like hooking up. But she has kicked so called good Eva’s ass if she knew Papi’s reputation. Hope Shane will fix it cuz she is Carmen’s hero as Carmen mentioned. Thanks for the awesome chapter and pps.

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