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True love – Chapter 24
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Shane: “What should I wear? I want to make a good impression.”
Carmen: “What about the blue shirt?”
Shane: “You mean the one I was wearing when I met her the first time? You’re kidding, right. It will be like a déjà-vu for her.”
Carmen: “But you made a good first impression, it might help.”
Shane: “Nah…you know what? I’m going to wear a white shirt this time. You know, white the color of innocense, right?”
Carmen: “Well…we all know that you’re not innocent at all but who knows. It might help.”
She smiled cockily and gave me a peck on the lips.
Shane’s POV
We stood in front of the door of the Morales house. My hands were all sweaty and I didn’t say a word during the ride. Carmen took my hand and gave me a kiss on the cheek before she knocked the door.
Gloria, Carmen’s younger sister answered the door. She hugged her sister and smiled at me shyly.
Gloria: “Hi. Come in. Mom’s in the kitchen.”
We walked into the kitchen and saw somebody standing next to Mercedes whom I would never have expected.
Shane: “Hello, Miss Morales.”
Mercedes and her guest turned around looking at Carmen and me, but she was clearly avoiding my glance. Her guest and I looked at each other for a long time before Mercedes broke the silence.
Mercedes: “Carmencita. Come here, give me a hug.”
Carmen hugged her mother looking as surprised as me to see the other guest.
Mercedes: “Carmen, this is Eva Torres. Roberto’s daughter. You remember him? He was your father’s best friend. She was helping Gloria when her car ran out of gas, so I invited her.”
Carmen: “Yeah…I know her.”
Mercedes: “Really? How nice. Come on, let’s sit down and eat.”
What the fuck? I knew it would be hard to face Mercedes. She tried to ignore me and now I had to handle her and my wannabe competition.
We all sat down and started to eat.
Mercedes: “So, Eva. How did you meet my daughter?”
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babez im lovin’ dis to da fullest :p But hey dat wuz a cheap, messed up move on both Mercedes and Papi . . . I’m glad dat my gurlz Shane and Carmen are able to talk more freely now than b/4 . . . Whelp, I hope u iz plannin on gracin us with anotha update like today, lol ~puppy-pout~ Like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;p . . . Stank, da’ one and only, chicka ;D Holla’ at me sumthimez!!
heeey great chap please post soon cause im already waiting for the update
this was a great update! mercedes better be careful because she will lose carmen if she continues to take this route…loved how shane reassured carmen…cant wait for the next chapter
great post! And papi’s attitude always make me laugh.. which leads me to ask, does anyone know why papi isn’t in season 5? It bummes me out..argh!^^ Aaanyways.. PPS!!=)
wow, this chap broke my heart…! honestly its one of my favourites. I loved every word! From the hot and cute beginning to the unbelievably sweet ending. I really really liked the last scene in the car….carmen climbing on shane’s lap and shane being soooo reassuring, it was sooooo good.On the other hand i cant believe Mercedes was trying to hook carmen up witj Papi!!!!!!!!!I didnt expect that from her, i mean sure she is angry with shane and it might take forever to fully trust her put hooking carmen with papi in from of shane is too much.anyway, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok???? i cant wait for so long again!!!!!!
awesome chap..poor Carm, Mercedes can be wicked harsh, can’t wait for next update!!!!!
hey really liked this chapter keep up the good work
Mecedes has a habit like hooking up. But she has kicked so called good Eva’s ass if she knew Papi’s reputation. Hope Shane will fix it cuz she is Carmen’s hero as Carmen mentioned. Thanks for the awesome chapter and pps.