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True love – Chapter 24
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Papi: “Well, I met her in café that is called “The Planet”, we met each other through friends. I had no idea that she was your daughter.”
Mercedes: “How nice! Carmen didn’t tell me about that. I haven’t seen her for a long time lately.”
Carmen: “I was busy, mother.”
Mercedes: “With what?”
Carmen: “Work.”
Mercedes: “Oh, Carmen. Did you know that Eva drives famous people around? Maybe she can help you to get to know somebody and you can work for them. Carmen is a DJ, Eva. She is good.”
Papi: “Well, I didn’t get the chance to see her, but I heard about her skills.”
Great. Just great. Her mother was trying to hook her up with Papi. I didn’t know that the lunch could become worse.
Mercedes: “Roberto told me you were still single, is that right?”
Papi: “Yes, I am still looking for the lady of my life.”
I looked at Papi in disbelief. This had to be a joke. The only thing Papi might be looking for is a girl she hasn’t slept with so far.
Mercedes: “So you like girls? My Carmen likes girls, too. What a lucky coincidence! What do you think about marriage?”
Carmen: “Okay, enough mother. Will you please come into the kitchen with me?”
Mercedes reluctantly followed her angry daughter, leaving Papi and me alone.
Shane: “What the fuck, Papi?”
Papi: “What? I didn’t know you guys were coming. Mercedes wanted me to stay and meet her daughter. I had no idea it was Carmen.”
Shane: “Yeah, sure.”
Papi: “Are you afraid of competition, Vanilla?”
Shane: “At least I am not lying into her face.”
Papi: “What do you mean, I am not lying.”
Shane: “Sure…so every time you fucked a girl you thought that it was the love of your life?”
Papi: “I said that I am looking for the lady of my life, sometimes you have to test all of them to make sure you get the best, you know?”
Shane: “You know what? Why don’t you just leave and fuck yourself?”
Papi: “I’d love to leave, but not alone. Still working on it.”
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babez im lovin’ dis to da fullest :p But hey dat wuz a cheap, messed up move on both Mercedes and Papi . . . I’m glad dat my gurlz Shane and Carmen are able to talk more freely now than b/4 . . . Whelp, I hope u iz plannin on gracin us with anotha update like today, lol ~puppy-pout~ Like alwayz from me, Baby-gurl, LYLAS ;p . . . Stank, da’ one and only, chicka ;D Holla’ at me sumthimez!!
heeey great chap please post soon cause im already waiting for the update
this was a great update! mercedes better be careful because she will lose carmen if she continues to take this route…loved how shane reassured carmen…cant wait for the next chapter
great post! And papi’s attitude always make me laugh.. which leads me to ask, does anyone know why papi isn’t in season 5? It bummes me out..argh!^^ Aaanyways.. PPS!!=)
wow, this chap broke my heart…! honestly its one of my favourites. I loved every word! From the hot and cute beginning to the unbelievably sweet ending. I really really liked the last scene in the car….carmen climbing on shane’s lap and shane being soooo reassuring, it was sooooo good.On the other hand i cant believe Mercedes was trying to hook carmen up witj Papi!!!!!!!!!I didnt expect that from her, i mean sure she is angry with shane and it might take forever to fully trust her put hooking carmen with papi in from of shane is too much.anyway, pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok???? i cant wait for so long again!!!!!!
awesome chap..poor Carm, Mercedes can be wicked harsh, can’t wait for next update!!!!!
hey really liked this chapter keep up the good work
Mecedes has a habit like hooking up. But she has kicked so called good Eva’s ass if she knew Papi’s reputation. Hope Shane will fix it cuz she is Carmen’s hero as Carmen mentioned. Thanks for the awesome chapter and pps.