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True love – Chapter 4
The blonde girl: “Call me…I want to know if you have other qualities, too…”
She grins at Shane and gives her a kiss on her cheek. Shane just smiles shyly and puts the money and the phone number into her pocket. Carmen observed the scene, she imagined herself following this girl and kicking her ass.
Shane: “Carmen. Hey. Are you okay?”
Carmen wakes up from her daydream:” What?…Yes, sorry I was just thinking.”
She smiles nervously. Shane notices that something bothers Carmen, she isn’t sure if it’s jealousy, so she doesn’t insist on an answer.
Carmen: “About the last time at the Planet…I’m sorry…I shouldn’t have hit you…I couldn’t control myself anymore, but that doesn’t justify anything…”
Shane looks Carmen into the eyes and notices her regret.
Shane: “Don’t worry, Carmen. I think I can forgive you the physical abuse.”
She laughs and Carmen nudges her arm and laughs, too.
Carmen: “Hey, come on I didn’t abuse you.”
Shane giggles: “Oh yes, you did ! How do would you call it, when somebody hits you with a book?”
Carmen pretends to be mortally offended by pouting and crossing her arms.
Shane laughs even more:” Oh, so you are the one who abuses me, and then you’re offended when I tell you the truth?”
Carmen turns around and continues to act like as if she was too offended to speak to Shane.
Shane grins: “Okay, okay. You didn’t abuse me.”
Carmen still doesn’t say anything.
Shane: “ So, what should I do for your forgiveness?”
Shane gives Carmen a kiss on the cheek and smiles: “Can you forgive me now?”
Carmen just shakes her head.
Shane: “What about this…”
Shane leans forward and gives Carmen a kiss on her lips. She looks her ex-fiancée deep into her eyes and kisses her again. But suddenly Shane stops.
Shane: “I’m sorry…I didn’t mean to…”
Carmen puts her finger on Shane’s lips to stop her from speaking. She pulls her close to her and kisses her intensely. They kiss hard and move towards to restroom.
In the restroom their kisses become more and more intense. Shane pushes Carmen against the wall and Carmen opens Shane’s Jeans, while Shane puts her hands under Carmen’s skirt. She pulls Carmen’s thong down while she keeps kissing her. Carmen moans full of desire.
Carmen: “Shane…Shane, we shouldn’t to this…”
Shane stops kissing Carmen. She steps back and clothes her jeans. Carmen can see the confusion in her eyes.
Shane: “I’m sorry…I thought you wanted this…”
Carmen puts her hands on Shane’s cheeks and looks deeply into her eyes: “You don’t know how much I want this. But we shouldn’t do it…we shouldn’t do it because you don’t want a relationship with me. And I don’t want to become a random girl you sleep with…”
Shane just nods and looks down at her feet, while Carmen puts on her thong.
Carmen: “ We really need to talk, Shane. I…The things you did to me. They still hurt. And I may forgive you, but I can’t forget…I think we should try to be friends…”
Shane looks at Carmen in disbelief: “ Friendship? Is that really what you want, Carm?”
Carmen: “ Yes, Shane. “ She smiles weakly: “I missed you so much during those three months. You can’t even imagine how miserable I felt…I think I need you to be a part of my life. As a friend…”
Shane: “Okay…if this is what you want. We should try it. But I think I know exactly what you mean, Carm. Because I missed you, too…”
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(40 votes, average: 3.38 out of 5)
Dis iz fuckin’ awesome!!! But can Shane and Carmen handle a simple “Friendship”? . . . hmmmmm . . . Whelp, like alwayz from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS!!!! Oh and sorry for not commenting . . . I’ve been kina busy, but I have been readin though . . . jus know dat u got dis tomboi HOOKED 4 LIFE!!! HoLlA aT mE!!! Stank . . . Da’ one and only, chicka!!
Great update! I wonder if Carmen is still going to go out with Papi after what Alice and Jenny told her. It should also be interesting to see Shane and Carmen trying to be “just friends”. PPS
ok wow a friendship noooooooo these two are sooo meant to be together i dont think they can handle a friendship only thing, shane wake up and get your girl back geez. great post as usual pps