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Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 5
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“Um…” She tried to find the words to tell her everything, tell her about her past, the horrible things she’d done and the life she’d once lived but she didn’t know where to start or even how. She smashed her fist on the table to bring her composure back, ‘Get a ***** grip, you have to do this.’
“Shane, are you okay honey?” Carmen sounded worried and anxious on the other line. Shane felt her heart twist in her chest.
“Yeah I’m fine, I just… I have to talk to you later tonight.”
“Are you sure you don’t want to talk about it now?”
“I’m sure. You finish your dubbing and I’ll see you at The Planet around 10:30 okay?”
“Okay… Are you sure though?”
Shane couldn’t help but smile at her girlfriend’s concern, she truly felt blessed to have someone who cared so much about her in her life. “Yeah I’m sure babe. You know I love you right?”
“Of course I do, you know I love you too?”
“Yup. I’ll see you later tonight.”
“Alright. Love you.”
“Love you too.”
“Bye.”
“Bye.
When Carmen heard the dial tone, she felt the dark feeling of impending doom creep into her bones, causing her to shiver involuntarily. ‘What the ***** was that about?’ she wondered to herself. She was one to trust her gut instincts and what they were telling her at that moment was nothing good.
Her thoughts had been filled with Shane the entire day, not that that was a bad thing, it made work more bearable but just a little harder to concentrate on. She was so caught up in a day dream at one point that she didn’t notice her coffee mug overflowing until a co-worker/friend snapped her out of her out of it. She made numerous excuses for her lapse in brain activity but her friend saw right through her and told her to get her mind out of the gutter with a wink and a smile.
It was incredible to her how someone could take her off of her game like that. Carmen, although fun and exuberant, knew how to be a professional when it was required and if there was a job to be done, she put 1000% into making sure it was done right.
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great update!
Update, update, update. Hurry up it’s killing me. They both need to talk ASAP. . . .Lol
everybody has bones in their closet their’s are falling out all around them!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh Shit! It has hit the fan. All that damn tension was suffocating. You definitely ‘brung da drama’. With that damn Clive around there won’t be anything but trouble. I won’t bash Casey just yet, not until we get more insight into her character. Great update.
I love this story… Clive along with Casey have to be shot!!!! And I don’t even know what is going to happen yet. Haha… Bring on the next chap already!
Well, now I’m all tensed up lol. You do drama reallllly well. :D And like tylo said, who doesn’t have dirt from their past that they don’t want anyone else to know about? :p I really felt sorry for Shane and her dilemma now: tell Carmen or Clive will tell her…both alternatives kinda suck. Understatement, I know. :p Clive really needs to learn a lesson in messing with people’s lives like he’s messing up Shane’s. Grrr. -.- I hope they both get the chance to talk things out, and clear things up. :) I love this fic, can’t wait to read more!! Plz plz update soon!
I love this fic and with the added drama, I know it will only get better. Thanks for writing this and sharing, I will be patiently awaiting the next update!
oh hell no!