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Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 5
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“Hello?”
“Hey girl it’s Kit.”
Carmen leaned against the oakwood desk to relieve some pressure off of her aching feet. She’d been running around all day with not much time to sit down and it was getting to her. “Hey boss what’s goin’ on?”
“I just wanted to call and make sure you were comin’ tonight.”
“I’ll be there.”
“Great. Make sure you bring Shane too, I want you love-birds to have a good time tonight.”
She gave a wistful sigh as she thought about the green-eyed beauty, “She’ll be there too. So, you gonna tell me about this DJ?”
“Oh yeah! Well I can’t.”
“You can’t? Why not?”
“Because I’ve been sworn to secrecy and I always keep my promises… most of the time anyways.”
“Who put you up to this.”
“Nuh uh girl my lips are sealed. Just be there tonight and you’ll find out everything. Ya dig?”
Letting out an exasperated sigh, Carmen threw a hand in the air in defeat. “I got it, see you later.”
“Peace baby.”
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The Planet was packed by the time Shane had gotten there. The heavy bass could be heard down the street and calmed her down slightly. The neon glow of The Planet’s sign was like a beacon from heaven, there, she would find her solace in the music, her friends, and her girlfriend as she forgot about the incident even if only for a few hours.
Alice and Dana were waiting for her outside of the doors and didn’t notice the slight frown Shane wore as she strode up to them.
“Hey guys.”
“Hey Shane!” replied a chipper and slightly tipsy Dana. “Me and Alice just… wait… no, Alice and I just had a few beers before you got here.”
“Right, Carmen here yet?”
“Yup, last time I saw her she was making her way through the crowds towards the DJ booth.” Alice responded nonchalantly.
Shane gazed at her a moment and opened her mouth to say something, but then thought better of it.
Instead, she gave wide smile at the thought of seeing her Carmen as she and her two friends walked into The Planet.
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great update!
Update, update, update. Hurry up it’s killing me. They both need to talk ASAP. . . .Lol
everybody has bones in their closet their’s are falling out all around them!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh Shit! It has hit the fan. All that damn tension was suffocating. You definitely ‘brung da drama’. With that damn Clive around there won’t be anything but trouble. I won’t bash Casey just yet, not until we get more insight into her character. Great update.
I love this story… Clive along with Casey have to be shot!!!! And I don’t even know what is going to happen yet. Haha… Bring on the next chap already!
Well, now I’m all tensed up lol. You do drama reallllly well. :D And like tylo said, who doesn’t have dirt from their past that they don’t want anyone else to know about? :p I really felt sorry for Shane and her dilemma now: tell Carmen or Clive will tell her…both alternatives kinda suck. Understatement, I know. :p Clive really needs to learn a lesson in messing with people’s lives like he’s messing up Shane’s. Grrr. -.- I hope they both get the chance to talk things out, and clear things up. :) I love this fic, can’t wait to read more!! Plz plz update soon!
I love this fic and with the added drama, I know it will only get better. Thanks for writing this and sharing, I will be patiently awaiting the next update!
oh hell no!