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Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 6
Bette, although she admired her fortitude, understood how ignorant this woman was being to the basic facts. “I’m not trying to sound like a ***** but you almost beat a man to death and you’re one of the darkest faces around here. I don’t think the police will treat you with much respect.”
Casey’s eyes softened slightly at the woman’s concern. “I’ve dealt with worse.” And as she said this three police cruisers and two ambulances pulled up. Six police officer’s jumped out, guns drawn.
“PUT YOUR HANDS IN THE AIR! ALL OF YOU!” An officer screamed as he pointed his gun towards the three women.
All three complied and raised their hands above their heads. Embarrassment was not a sufficient enough word to describe Bette’s feelings at that moment. “I’m the one who called you guys, my name is Bette Porter.”
“SHUT UP! I WANT YOU ALL TO TURN AROUND GET ON YOUR KNEES! NOW!”
Shane and Casey immediately turned about and got on their knees but Bette remained defiant with her hands in the air. “I’m not getting down on my knees when I did nothing wrong!”
“Mrs. Porter, I understand you’re a proud woman and all but they have guns and are known to be one of the most corrupt police forces in the United States so I would suggest that you do what they say so this can move along faster.” Casey stated calmly.
“TURN AROUND AND GET ON YOUR KNEES LADY OR I WILL USE FORCE!” The police roared back at her.
Frustrated as *****, Bette did as she was told by the officer and the cops went behind them all and put them in handcuffs. The Paramedics ran towards Clive to make sure he was still breathing. He was, and they placed him on a stretcher and into the back of the ambulance.
Two cops went up to Carmen to make sure that she was alright. The other four sat Bette, Shane, and Casey on the sidewalk before dragging them to individual cruisers to be questioned.
Each gave their story of the events and all seemed to corroborate with each other. Carmen was still shaken up but was told by the Paramedics that she would be fine with some sleep. Shane’s cut wasn’t too deep and only required several stitches that they did on the spot with a numbing agent and a little endurance. Bette and Shane were let go but Casey was still in handcuffs as she and her car were searched thoroughly.
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Dat was off the chain!!!! Man you really got this whole thang down pack. Please post soon . . . and remember there’s no such thing as posting to much, lol;) Anyways,LYLAS, C-ya
WOW! Casey really kicked Clive’s ass. My take on this is Carmen & Casey really seem to have a strong bond. Althopugh I do feel that bond is because of the history they shared as young lovers. Her connection to Shane is a more mature one. Its just going to take Carmen some time to decipher the emotions she feels for these two women. Excellent post, I just wouldn’t want to be in Carmens shoes right about now.
ooo boy…soo much drama drama and intensity, i love it! i’ll be waiting for an update :)
I’m back again :), I just read this post a second time and a couple more questions came to mind. I also want to know the background on Casey and Carmen’s realationship. It seems like something pretty bad happened to cause them to separate/break-up like they did or if not that something bad happened to both of them similar to this insident and I hope you give us more insight on that . . . . Oh well just wondering.LYLAS, C-ya
dang, casey kicked ass!! clive got what he deserved. that fight scene was well-written and intense! can’t wait to read carmen/casey’s story unfold, and for shane to tell hers. thx for the update. good luck on final exams. ^ – ^
great job! i love your story BB!
great update post now
oh yeah that´s great.I feel sad for carmen´I think she was happy with casy, I hate if poeple lost each other.but hey she´s now with shane and I hope they will both work everything out.great update!
This is a fantastic story. Please keep it coming. Give me more…soon. The drama and suspense are great…. but waiting for more is killing me. I luv it.