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Truly, Madly, Deeply: Chapter 6
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She didn’t understand what was happening, it was as if some sort of force and torn him off of her. When she sat up abruptly, she saw a dark silhouette standing in the way of the porch light, its back to her face. The shape was huge as it cast a shadow in her direction, enabling her to see Carmen and the combined look of horror, relief, and disbelief on her beautiful face.
“This can’t be happening.” Carmen muttered out loud in shock. She watched as Clive got up and stared at Casey who must have been 4 times his muscle mass. He spit out the dirt he’d accumulated from his flight and charged towards hulking woman who only stood there, waiting.
Quick as lightening, she grabbed his arm which held the knife and twisted it over her head as she moved behind him in the graceful dance of battle. Raising her own arm up in the air and bending it at the elbow, she send her arm crashing down on Clive’s own elbow.
The sickening sound of bone breaking and a painful shrill scream made Shane and Carmen gasp at the act and become nauseous at the result. Half the lights in the neighborhood turned on.
The blade and Clive were on the floor. The latter rolling and writhing in pain as he gripped is disfigured limb. Pieces of bone jutted out of the skin and made what was once a perfectly functional arm, look mangled and bloody. But Casey wasn’t done yet.
She grabbed him by the front of his shirt and lifted him to his feet. He was shaking his head in a desperate silent plea for mercy but was met with repeated blows to his face.
Bette had run back out with a gun in her hand, a safety precaution just in case anymore right wing lunatics would try to harm her and her family. But when she saw the recent developments, a woman quite literally beating the life out of that gangly man who was trying to stab Shane; she went blank.
Carmen had her hands clasped over her mouth. She had seen this before, almost the exact same scene, but it was her on the ground the last time and she was in a worse way then Shane was.
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Dat was off the chain!!!! Man you really got this whole thang down pack. Please post soon . . . and remember there’s no such thing as posting to much, lol;) Anyways,LYLAS, C-ya
WOW! Casey really kicked Clive’s ass. My take on this is Carmen & Casey really seem to have a strong bond. Althopugh I do feel that bond is because of the history they shared as young lovers. Her connection to Shane is a more mature one. Its just going to take Carmen some time to decipher the emotions she feels for these two women. Excellent post, I just wouldn’t want to be in Carmens shoes right about now.
ooo boy…soo much drama drama and intensity, i love it! i’ll be waiting for an update :)
I’m back again :), I just read this post a second time and a couple more questions came to mind. I also want to know the background on Casey and Carmen’s realationship. It seems like something pretty bad happened to cause them to separate/break-up like they did or if not that something bad happened to both of them similar to this insident and I hope you give us more insight on that . . . . Oh well just wondering.LYLAS, C-ya
dang, casey kicked ass!! clive got what he deserved. that fight scene was well-written and intense! can’t wait to read carmen/casey’s story unfold, and for shane to tell hers. thx for the update. good luck on final exams. ^ – ^
great job! i love your story BB!
great update post now
oh yeah that´s great.I feel sad for carmen´I think she was happy with casy, I hate if poeple lost each other.but hey she´s now with shane and I hope they will both work everything out.great update!
This is a fantastic story. Please keep it coming. Give me more…soon. The drama and suspense are great…. but waiting for more is killing me. I luv it.