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Then Alice was asleep and they remained where they were, in their
somehow deigned positions. Helena on the right and Dana on the left.
Both of them gazing down at her with the same look of utter love and
devotion before they slowly looked up and met their gazes for the
second time since this had begun.
“I still hate you,” Dana spoke first, her tone holding very little
malice and speaking in an entirely calm and matter of fact way.
“That’s quite good because I believe I still hate you as well,” Helena
responded, her voice laced with amusement and her eyebrow arched.
Snorting at this, Dana looked at Alice and her features immediately
softened as she pushed aside a lock of blonde hair that fell into her
eyes. “She’s going to be embarrassed,” she murmured after a long moment
of silence. Looking up at Helena with worried blue eyes, she nibbled
her bottom lip. “What we just did, you know? She’ll be really
embarrassed.”
“Yes,” said Helena, releasing a sigh and wondering perhaps why they
weren’t feeling embarrassed. She supposed it might have something to do
with the fact they both wanted, even now, to show Alice in every way
they knew how just what they felt for her in hopes of solidifying the
chance they would be the one chosen. “We ought to fix the flat,” she
said finally, turning her attention to Dana. “Make it so she will
perhaps think this was some mad form of drunken night terrors.”
“That works,” said Dana, nodding her head. The athlete started to move
off the bed but paused when she realized doing so would give Helena a
perfect look at her body. Darting her gaze over to the British woman,
she didn’t know if she should be relieved or jealous that the heiress
was focused solely on Alice, her fingers lightly tracing her bottom
lip. Rolling off the bed to plunk onto the floor, Dana hastily pulled
on her clothes. “Come on,” she huffed, facing the doorway and refusing
to look back at naked Helena doing who knows what to Alice. “We’ve got
to clean or mess up or something. I don’t know. What are we doing
again?”
Rolling her eyes and pulling on the pink Flock of Seagulls t-shirt and
her worn blue jeans, Helena said, “We’re making it so the flat looks as
if some form of drunken insanity has invaded it. So she will be more
apt to believe, if she should recall all this, it was merely a figment
of her hops and barley consumption.”
“Figment of her hops and barley consumption,” repeated Dana who snorted again. “What the ***** does that mean anyway?”
“Beer ingredients,” Helena said in a supremely droll reply. “I don’t
suppose you ever read the bottles of what you so very greedily guzzle?”
The women continued to bicker without much real hostility behind the
sentiments or words for the rest of the night while Alice continued to
sleep the sleep of the drunken and the dead. Unaware completely of
everything going on around her, even when Dana and Helena argued over
who should put be the one to put pajamas on her. At least she stayed
that way until she woke up the next morning.
Or to be more accurate, woke up the next afternoon. Crawling out of bed
and tugging at her black tank top as she padded into the living room,
Alice froze on seeing the figures of Dana Fairbanks sprawled on her
crappy couch and Helena Peabody neatly curled onto her crappier
recliner. Studying the sleeping women and the piles of alcohol lying at
their feet, Alice rubbed her head and wondered what the ***** happened
last night.
Then she looked at them.
Really looked at them both. The two women she loved and the two women
who loved her and she knew she would have to make a decision and soon.
She couldn’t keep doing this to them, it wasn’t right, it just wasn’t
right to any of them. Alice knew that with every bone in her body that
she really did have to finally decide.
But first she had to make some coffee and find some Advil. Because
matters of the heart should never be dealt with while suffering from a
horrific hangover. Or at least, that’s what Lenore had always said.
-End-
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!