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Tumbling Down
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Alice’s head tossed back when Helena dropped to kiss the line of her
neck, gazing upwards as Dana appeared again, fingers tangling in blonde
hair to tug her head further back still. Firm but gentle, seizing
Alice’s lips for a kiss that was vicious in the passion it displayed,
making the blonde moan and quiver into Helena’s hands that were resting
steady on her hips. The writer felt herself losing her hold on gravity,
perhaps even on reality itself, and found her back slammed against the
wall of the hallway right in front of her bedroom.
The right of her covered in Helena, the left of her covered in Dana,
both women kissing and licking and biting and touching and moaning and
saying over and over and over again how much they loved Alice,
desperate to prove it to her in that moment. No longer even seeming
aware of the other’s presence because for them it didn’t matter that
the other woman was there. The only thing that mattered was Alice and
pleasing her, making her happy.
No, strike that. The only thing that mattered was making Alice come.
Making her come long and hard and with such ***** intensity of
emotion that she couldn’t ever wonder how they felt for her. That’s
what mattered to them right now.
And that’s precisely what they set about doing.
But not before they locked their gazes in a silent moment of acceptance
and understanding. This wasn’t about them anymore and their petty
feuding over Alice and her love. It was about the fact that they loved
Alice as much as they did and wanted her to be happy, no matter which
of them she chose. They looked at one another and acknowledged the
silent agreement being made before turning their attentions swiftly
back to Alice who they had lying on her bed.
Moving in a strange sort of sexual ballet, Dana went upwards while
Helena slid downwards. Dana for a nibbling kiss to the lips and slow
unbuttoning of Alice’s shirt, Helena for a long lick to the underside
of Alice’s midsection and the loud unzipping of her blue jeans.
Between the two women, the clothing was made short work of, though the
only help they gave was in undressing Alice and not each other. Their
attention didn’t once linger on studying the other’s body except for
nothing more than an accident of the eyes. They didn’t have interest
for anyone other than the blonde lying between them, looking at them
with a lidded brown gaze dark enough that it was almost an inky black.
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wow…that was the craziest thing i have ever read…DAMN
Meant to add when I commented earlier that I like your definition of ‘sane’ in the author’s note: not planning a road trip to Canada = sane. I’m sane (well, for now at least)!
oh my! you are amazing – i’m still in denial about the spoilers – but if ic could get you on the writing team, i might be able to handle it! wow!
It’s Helena’s turn for happiness and understanding. Besides, she’s sooooo sexy
This is excellent Dreiser! I salute you!
I’ve never really liked Helena, but you gave her an actual personality and also made me completely fall for her. The choice Alice has to make seems to be impossible at this time.
Loved it, loved it, loved it.
DUDE. You totally know how much I love this story, because I told you as much, like, 50 million times while I tried to find out this story’s ETA.
Damn. Angst and sex, you know that’s my favourite fan fic combo. I think you nailed it, really. The love Alice and Dana have for one another, how similar Helena and Alice really are and how the bond would emerge from that. It’s all so fucking good.
If I weren’t already on board with Helacious, this would totally sway me over.
That brings a new meaning to angst! I love your rules of attraction fic but never post so thought id do so here. Loving the drama in that at the moment too but it has got me guiltily craving the fluff! I think after the fight in that they deserve some make-up worthy of chapter sixs extravaganza? Just a thought!
OK so you’ve left us with a cliffhanger in Laws this week, but all is forgiven. This was amazing. You made me love Helacious, or at least really feel for Helena. Funny, sad and hot.
this is great and I love it just like your another story is there anymore to this one though as to when and where alice makes her decision about the two women in her life if there is more please post soon
Tumbling down in deed…Wow, great one shot story. I admit that the way you wrote Helena made me almost want Alice to chose Helena. With that said, the danish shipper in me just wouldn’t allow that thought to linger for to long–though if all goes to hell in season 3 and the writers were able to write helena as human and as affectionate as you have, then i could be splitting some time between two ships…and because i am a perv loved the sex scene. helena, alice, dana, oh my…good stuff. And one last comment: FINALLY Alice is the one being fought over. Loved it.
someone finally wrote a threesome that was not trite and boring! good for you dreiser. Wow. But does my heart ache for Alice, Dana, and Helena. I wish one of them would declare, whomever you pick Alice, I still love you and you are guarenteed my friendship for life. At least if I were with her thats what I would say… because even if she didn’t have sex with me ever again it would be enough to be in her presense as her friend her colleague and her confidant. Colla cavod (congratulations in hebrew), Dreiser you make LOVEALICE think and write very lengthy comments with no particular point. Great story.
Peace and Love,
LOVEALICE
everything you write always turns out sooooooooo entertaining, gr8 story BUT will u still continue with a part 19 in L.O.A?? it’s killing me 2 see whats going 2 happen…??
Damn girl you are so good that almost I want helacious more than danish; I said “almost” :P. If IC can give us this Helena it’s gonna be very interesting her interaction with Alice :D
I can only come up with three words. Pure Romantic Torture.
Wicked! Give yourself an affectionate slap on the ass for this.
I absolutely love this fic. I have been searching for some good fic with the Dana/Alice/Helena triangle, and I found some amazing work here! It’s very easy to relate to all members of the trio, both Dana and Helena for being so devoted to Alice, and Alice for loving them in return but not knowing how to choose one over the other. Keep up the outstanding work and please post more fanfic asap!